CarsonJet vs Lil C
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-06-05 at 01:41 AM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

CarsonJet has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 01:12 AM.

Lil C has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 01:12 AM.

Look
career statistics is nothin, have this kid re-tire quicka than tha Michelin man (1)
lines fo simpled minded,you couldn't spit a line of fire if u was stationed over in Afganistan (2)
i ain't talkin about basketball but this kid stay takin rim~shots(3)
willin to bet you handle more joysticks than gamecubes and Xbox(4)
rewind the lines in my verse~spit my verse and you cursed(5)
so you winnin this battle is all make-up like we dissected a purse(6)
end up actin a jerk, i leave you listenin to birds that chirp(7)
wit a mic i'll leave you dead in tha studio like ROC's Dirt McGirta(8)
picture this picture i pitcha, make sho you holdin ya flash(9)
after i win i'll show you were you messed up like the ghost of Christmas past(10)
actin like you actually could win~a stick to tha script(11)
Since itz close to christmas i got spirit so i'll wrap this battle up quick(12)
Ayo i get to penetratin ya loss column like grandmas panties(13)
I'll leave u fucked up like Elmer Fudd did bambi's family(14)
Letz recount tha odds of you beaten Truth~there A.R'n't M.A.N.I(15)
Be fo real, with cha album sales you couldn't break change fo pennies(16)
dislexic reader than i letchu interpret i commit REDRUM on trax(17)
read that back and kidz a start ta realize that tha truth is back(18)

Shits like cingular, It's clear as day wit 5 bars....
I'll have C flashin death quicker than Her avatar....
Text record 2-3, an u wanna fuk wit me? Please.......
Aint gotta tilt my head to see, ur ugly at any degree
You shoulda known, You shouldna stepped, An now ya Owned,
I win...5-0..To sum unknown....Ghetto'Oompa Loompa Clone
Call me a wigga...go figure u say nigger but your white,
Which is what? And What is right?......
Shit All I know...Is your a wannabee C'
Dumb Bitch....19....
An the poll's 'll show....They all agree.

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Voted For: CarsonJet

lol, damn
Lil C, you cool n all, but sorry, Carson beat u hands down here, much more consistancy an flow ta his verse, Carson, nice personals an puns here, structure was right on point, sick stuff Carson

Lil C, no hate obviously, but ya bars were stretched, an the structure was everywhere, sorry but his personals beat u, ya need'a remove any uneccessary words from ya verse, ta make it flow better an so its not as stretched, ya had some good ideas, creativity was there, but u just worded ya stuff wrong, no hate babygirl

Nice stuff Carson

Could y'all return the favor in any of my battles ya see floating around on Frontlines or elevated frontlines?
thanks

Peace out

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Voted For: Lil C

i was feelin the punches, wordplay, and vocab in this verse, clever shit here. lines were stretched which fucked up the flow a little bit, but overall i thought lil c's verse hit harder, couple of multi's thrown in there, but you can elevate on that...

carson that was a good verse you dropped there, decent punches... you can elevate on the wordplay though, and try to keep your lines the same length, that'll help your flow

overall this was a decent battle and i was feelin both verses, but i think that the creativity in c's verse makes me give it to him

vote: lil c

LMAO!.....

This is pretty funny shit.
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WOW.

Voted For: CarsonJet

You shoulda known, You shouldna stepped, An now ya Owned,
I win...5-0..To sum unknown....Ghetto'Oompa Loompa Clone

^^one of the reasons you won

that was by far one of the funniest lines i have ever read in a battle hahaha.. but yea carson your structure is wack as shit but u still took it with better wordplay and vocab. it was a lil basic but not bad

lil c--- eh you had your metas and all that shit but it was weak as hell. read the tutorials and shit they helped me alot..you had potential but u didnt have alot of good personals or punches and things seemed played

both of ya work on your structures...

Vote//Carson Jet

return the favor.... honest votes only..

o yea link is in the sig..........^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

LMAO!.....

This is pretty funny shit.
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WOW.

This was feedback posted for CarsonJet
 

carson that was fucking wack you suck no wonder you keep ducking me..........................