hataz n dick ridaz of rv diss
 

-alpha assassin.......


my diss to the assholes of rv:

why you looking at how handsom i am?....silly faggot dicks r 4 chicks....n im the dumb ass!?!? 2 answer your las question....yes my pops was an abuser n and wife beater.......my mom chose her sex life over me n left me on the streets.......and well while livin wit my father this las time he left me in juvi in n.j. n moved wit my step-mom and siblings 2 virginia.
and also my mother let her b/f's beat me 2...........but y am i telling u this...shit i aint got shit else 2 do but 2 humor and taunt poor excuse 4 tryin 2 b a bully...n for the las fuckin time where does it say anything about anything 2 do wit me supposedly tryin 2 act hard?.......obviously you guys are written a book......so let me knowledge u niggaz and sit in my class, 2days lesson starts wit all of u kissin my ass//you niggaz on rv throwin stones but toss out pebble's,but niggaz i move boulders,when i dust off my shoulders u not on my level//ima be who i am til im murdered or die,why pervert's checkin out a guy?//i switch my flow,with every twist of the dro,truth is a lot of u niggaz soundin like a hoe,quit ridin my nuts n stick yo mind on yo dough,yea im fuckin white the world already know,shove it or love it im headin str8 4 da pro's,so niggaz drop me 2 links or ur thread will b closed,wit my money on my mind and my eyes on my foes//"boost ya vocabulary,so im written u a dictionary,ya niggaz aint thugs those guns are imaginary,im a hip-hop missionary,shittin on my advosaries,niggaz love it when i log another journal in my diary,they be like allik war can u post anotha essay for me,let me say it more clearly,since u herbs cant hear me,ima stay sayin nigga,til sum1 pull the trigger an bury me//orcastrate a mastepiece to deminstrate,i hate all bitches i dont discriminate,inconsiderate's,insubordinate's y u gotta playa hate?//i see wut u wanna be when i look in the mirror,im finna make dis a career 4 da new era,n my diabloical existence gonna reign terror,by the time im done u gonna b da 1 callin da sheriff,terrific wit the flow when the image is horogliphic,2 b specific u gotta admit it,when i hit the mic i rip it,my skills are so in tune...2 even download it,2 the computer onto rapverse i gotta zip it,its allik war but when i flip it im a raw killa nigga//i create dreamworks like spielberg,you think im spittin best nigga i aint even past the tip of the iceberg,i play words,in word play,got multi's comin in from every single way,niggaz take heed 2 wut i say,each and every single day,u can bitch and moan but im still gonna remain the same,i got married 2 da rap game,my feelings for music aint neva gonna change,i see your attempt's 2 bring me down,but no matter wut you say im still gonna b around,im pullin so many tricks you'd think i was a magical clown,im still laughing at u bitches i aint neva gonna frown,when ya got yo teeth filled the only time u had a crown//(intermission)you mutha fuckas think u kool? think u bad cuz u talkin shit on a rap site?like eminem says in his las battle on 8 mile...."i know everything you muthafuckas got 2 say against......tells these muthafuckas sumtin else they dont know about me"-rabbit.......back 2 rv diss........
so let me knowledge u niggaz and sit in my class, 2days lesson starts wit all of u kissin my ass//you niggaz on rv throwin stones but toss out pebble's,but niggaz i move boulders,when i dust off my shoulders u not on my level//.......punk ass muthafuckas u say boost my vocabulary,structure my sentences properly,i see wut sayin but u aint stoppin me,nigga please,u call me handicap when in all truth ya'll the one's wit special needs!!!!!//

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216695

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217665

there's my 2 links....let the bitchin begin bitches......

thank you for the real feedback defyned truth i aint sweatin it...its like i said in this post....they hate me cuz they wanna b me feel me?ha ha though i feel ya on aim it late as fuck n x-mas eve n x-mas drained me so im hit up the pillow n fight the blanket 4 the bed after my girl leave....lol

you need to structure it cos its hard to read for me anyway still th u have nice flows in there

ez

ty 4 your reply grmsly ill make sure 2 rtf on sumtin of urs when i wake up peace uppin this for these dick ridin hataz holla

foreal.....i'll put something up once i enuff posts for that feed thingy...really confuses me..

ez and keep up those rhymes, its long but good foreal just structure them

ez

good looks homie stay up n fuck those hataz out there......*taps defyned truth's shoulder and says* " i see hater's all over rv"......lol peace niggaz

i'd love to come see you, thanks for the offer [/wtf?]

anyways, you really need a structure, and it was overall, extremely simple....but if you fix the structure up, pm me and i'll read the whole thing

Word to need to work on your sturcutre but other then that it was pretty cool..alittle simple to me but it hit pretty decent at some points.

*Moved to Disstracks*

thanx man........@ bonecollector.....drake u kno how many people on here structure are wprse than mine but still seem 2 b better than every1 else.........the reason i did this is cuz im sick of every1 sleepin on me talkin shit peace uppin 4 feedback

Nobody wants to read paragraphs...
Don't type your verses in paragraphs..

that's how this shit was meant 2 b set up........starting after i quoted alpha assassin post 2 him asking me multiple questions.....if u actaully take the time outta ya busy scedule...ud see its well true in every aspect n sumtin none of u moron's can possibly top cuz ive already made it clear like eminem in 8 mile....i and the people of rv already know wut u stupid fucks got 2 say against me....kinda like da ultimate diss verse....uppin 4 real feedback not a waste of time

so let me knowledge u niggaz and sit in my class, 2days lesson starts wit all of u
kissin my ass//

you niggaz on rv throwin stones but toss out pebble's,but niggaz
i move boulders,when i dust off my shoulders u not on my level//

ima be who i am til im murdered or die,why pervert's checkin out a guy?//

i switch my flow,with every twist of the dro,truth is a lot of u niggaz soundin like a hoe,quit ridin my nuts n stick yo mind on yo dough,yea im fuckin white the world already know,shove it or love it im headin str8 4 da pro's,so niggaz drop me 2 links or ur thread will b closed,wit my money on my mind and my eyes on my foes//

"boost ya vocabulary,so im written u a dictionary,ya niggaz aint thugs those guns are imaginary,im a hip-hop missionary,shittin on my advosaries,niggaz love it when i log another journal in my diary,they be like allik war can u post anotha essay for me,let me say it more clearly,since u herbs cant hear me,ima stay sayin nigga,til sum1 pull the trigger an bury me//

orcastrate a mastepiece to deminstrate,i hate all bitches i dont discriminate,inconsiderate's,insubordinate's y u gotta playa hate?//

i see wut u wanna be when i look in the mirror,im finna make dis a career 4 da new era,n my diabloical existence gonna reign terror,by the time im done u gonna b da 1 callin da sheriff,terrific wit the flow when the image is horogliphic,2 b specific u gotta admit it,when i hit the mic i rip it,my skills are so in tune...2 even download it,2 the computer onto rapverse i gotta zip it,its allik war but when i flip it im a raw killa nigga//

i create dreamworks like spielberg,you think im spittin best nigga i aint even past the tip of the iceberg,i play words,in word play,got multi's comin in from every single way,niggaz take heed 2 wut i say,each and every single day,u can bitch and moan but im still gonna remain the same,i got married 2 da rap game,my feelings for music aint neva gonna change,i see your attempt's 2 bring me down,but no matter wut you say im still gonna b around,im pullin so many tricks you'd think i was a magical clown,im still laughing at u bitches i aint neva gonna frown,when ya got yo teeth filled the only time u had a crown//

(intermission)you mutha fuckas think u kool? think u bad cuz u talkin shit on a rap site?like eminem says in his las battle on 8 mile...."i know everything you muthafuckas got 2 say against......tells these muthafuckas sumtin else they dont know about me"-rabbit.......back 2 rv diss........

so let me knowledge u niggaz and sit in my class, 2days lesson starts wit all of u kissin my ass//

you niggaz on rv throwin stones but toss out pebble's,but niggaz i move boulders,when i dust off my shoulders u not on my level//

.......punk ass muthafuckas u say boost my vocabulary,structure my sentences properly,i see wut sayin but u aint stoppin me,nigga please,u call me handicap when in all truth ya'll the one's wit special needs!!!!!//

there i seperated the bars happy now?...who cares jus drop feed,cuz this should b easier 4 u nimrods 2 read!!!!