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Archeologist 10-24-04 09:38 PM

Socrates 'vs' CarsonJetX2
 
.Rules.
.Semi Finals So Come Dope.

Logic The Goonie 10-24-04 09:43 PM

I knew we would meet soon. G'luck man.

The Jett 10-25-04 01:38 PM

Checked in.
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The Jett 10-28-04 09:30 PM

Changed the name. Now we think your some champion-right?
Wrong, not wit-in ya sight. Ur just another Phantom-hyped.
Hit the light's. This kid's livin in the dark, thinken he got spark
Reppin crew's, but like your sig...A "eye" don't even fit the part...
Like ur stuck in park, Rate's. Ur not pullin the right gears in here-
They ain't gon' cheer....Soc u want Fan's? You better go to Sears.
Fuk spittin....or hackin.....I don't need your IP adress...
I'll rip thru pixel's, Grip ya neck and leave your box voiceless
Make you confess...This image you make..It's not what you are...
This South Kali Killa aint even old enuff to legally drive a car......

So....

Forget the belt's, If your a champ,....Than to win's insult....
And remember this...your only here because you MOD yourself....
Scarred wit welt's, Soc I'm playin...I never meant for ur pain.
But it aint like ur checkin. We never met. You jus saw my name.

Logic The Goonie 10-28-04 10:13 PM

It's "ooo"s and "ahh"s as soon as Soc steps in the faction
Compared to me,the -OH's you get only qualify as basic reactions!
Really, compared to you, Soc's a fuckin legend, im the hoods star
While the only hood youve ever been to,was at the front of your car!
The shit you spit is boring, gives everyone of us a snore
You used to know better...........but you and I dont talk anymore!
We know Vanilla Ice's reincarnation, is uglier and even more slow
So just make ya lyrics how ya "Pixar".........not "Finding Nemo"!
Usually in this type of situation, kid would run away he aint a fool
But when he saw he was facin me, he shoulda "Jet" times 2!
This bitch is wrecked imma conclude your entire career
Why did i vote for you every round? for an easy win when i got here!

If you didnt get something, seriously, dont vote, and that goes for both of us, g'luck Carson

L.I. 10-28-04 10:19 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Archeologist
#4- Normal Rules Apply

No Biting.
No Feeding.
No Crew Votes.
No Recycling.
No D/R.
No Hate.

Might wanna fix yah closer Soc

Logic The Goonie 10-28-04 10:30 PM

smeh, thnx, i dunno, i cant decide on this but since i edited my verse more than 10 minutes after check in, i dunno, we gotta see what Arch says, :( cant believe i was such an idiot.

I believe that if Carson says its coo, then all will be fine but its up to them.

nah layins?

Triple_N 10-29-04 04:05 AM

Breakdown for carson.....


Changed the name. Now we think your some champion-right?
Wrong, not wit-in ya sight. Ur just another Phantom-hyped.

EH...this was fair....u were kinda reaching tho

Hit the light's. This kid's livin in the dark, thinken he got spark
Reppin crew's, but like your sig...A "eye" don't even fit the part...

Wordplay......always a good thing..setup is blah

Like ur stuck in park, Rate's. Ur not pullin the right gears in here-
They ain't gon' cheer....Soc u want Fan's? You better go to Sears.

lol.....nice comedy..line is just fair tho


Fuk spittin....or hackin.....I don't need your IP adress...
I'll rip thru pixel's, Grip ya neck and leave your box voiceless

WORDPLAY again...best line right here..nice

Make you confess...This image you make..It's not what you are...
This South Kali Killa aint even old enuff to legally drive a car......

nah that was wack..need more...wit some wordplay or something woulda been ill

So....

Forget the belt's, If your a champ,....Than to win's insult....
And remember this...your only here because you MOD yourself....

Eh...I see the personal but...nah

Scarred wit welt's, Soc I'm playin...I never meant for ur pain.
But it aint like ur checkin. We never met. You jus saw my name.

wordplay again...decent shouldn't have used a s a closer though but decent


Soco's Breakdown...........

It's "ooo"s and "ahh"s as soon as Soc steps in the faction
Compared to me,the -OH's you get only qualify as basic reactions!

SEtup is blah & too braggish..and fractions seems like it jus there to rhyme wit reactions...punch is fair..coulda been stronger

Really, compared to you, Soc's a fuckin legend, im the hoods star
While the only hood youve ever been to,was at the front of your car!

NO!!!!this is just wack...way too basic

The shit you spit is boring, gives everyone of us a snore
You used to know better...........but you and I dont talk anymore!

Ok this is really weak an fillerish

We know Vanilla Ice's reincarnation, is uglier and even more slow
So just make ya lyrics how ya "Pixar".........not "Finding Nemo"!

setup is played as fuck but punch was nice

Usually in this type of situation, kid would run away he aint a fool
But when he saw he was facin me, he shoulda "Jet" times 2!

Blah..just bragging not a diss to opponent

This bitch is wrecked imma conclude your entire career
Why did i vote for you every round? for an easy win when i got here!

THats not a diss man..again just bragging

Carson...your verse was not very strong but far more complex....an that pixel line was a monster best line of battle by far.

Soco...I was really disappointed in your performance...I expected more...you usually have ill personals..what happened?......the nemo line was good & your best line an most complex line which isn't good cuz the like was just ok not a monster


SO I gave it to carson for his good wordplay in the 2 lines I highlighted...that pixal line took u over the top.....good luck & no hate to either emcee.



Vote: carson

Archeologist 10-29-04 07:36 PM

I will let it slide Socrates seen as you edited for a good reason.
Pz.

sdizzle 10-30-04 04:41 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Archeologist
I will let it slide Socrates seen as you edited for a good reason.
Pz.


fuck thats a rule violation

it should be closed right arch?

o wait, tis only IN YOUR BATTLEs


you fucking faggot

The Jett 10-30-04 04:46 PM

^lol@him.

You take this too seriouse.
I been tryin to lose for 3 rounds now. Let it go.

Abraxas 10-31-04 11:50 AM

Changed the name. Now we think your some champion-right?
Wrong, not wit-in ya sight. Ur just another Phantom-hyped.
this was ok.. i didnt like it as an opener though
Hit the light's. This kid's livin in the dark, thinken he got spark
Reppin crew's, but like your sig...A "eye" don't even fit the part...
this was iight.....
Like ur stuck in park, Rate's. Ur not pullin the right gears in here-
They ain't gon' cheer....Soc u want Fan's? You better go to Sears.
LO.. this was a good punch.....nice flow...
Fuk spittin....or hackin.....I don't need your IP adress...
I'll rip thru pixel's, Grip ya neck and leave your box voiceless
the rhyme sheme was weak but it was a good one
Make you confess...This image you make..It's not what you are...
This South Kali Killa aint even old enuff to legally drive a car......
no.... fuck this.. not a good persnoal
So....

Forget the belt's, If your a champ,....Than to win's insult....
And remember this...your only here because you MOD yourself....
wtf???? not a good one...
Scarred wit welt's, Soc I'm playin...I never meant for ur pain.
But it aint like ur checkin. We never met. You jus saw my name.
this was an ok closer

overall... your verse was kinda wea.. i saw better from you.. ya flo was iight.... some punches were iight no very direct punches.... you had allot of multis put ther... that was good...

It's "ooo"s and "ahh"s as soon as Soc steps in the faction
Compared to me,the -OH's you get only qualify as basic reactions!
not a good opening....
Really, compared to you, Soc's a fuckin legend, im the hoods star
While the only hood youve ever been to,was at the front of your car!
nice punch.... flow was iight....
The shit you spit is boring, gives everyone of us a snore
You used to know better...........but you and I dont talk anymore!
no... it was very weak.....
We know Vanilla Ice's reincarnation, is uglier and even more slow
So just make ya lyrics how ya "Pixar".........not "Finding Nemo"!
LOL... this was funny.. but not that good....
Usually in this type of situation, kid would run away he aint a fool
But when he saw he was facin me, he shoulda "Jet" times 2!
nice concpet in this personal but i thought you needed rewording in the other line
This bitch is wrecked imma conclude your entire career
Why did i vote for you every round? for an easy win when i got here!
no... this was kinda glorified... i didnt feel this one... bad closer..

overall... you hit hard with your personals and it was good.... you had ok flow

both of you had kinda weak verses.. ive seen better...

VOte: Carson for stronger punches... and good flow

Carson: 7.7/10
Socrates: 7.58/10

Archeologist 10-31-04 07:22 PM

CarsonJetX2 Advances Good Luck in the final man.
Pz.


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