Vc vs. marvolousj1009(forced word match)
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
forced words must be bolded or something so people can
see them
bar limits:
16 bar min.
32 bar max.

forced words you must use these in your battle verse or
be d'q: nature, intersection, ability, process

lol dem corny ass words....checkin it lets get it goin

why am i constantly in forced word matches..uhhh another mc to be slain.....

^^^oooo another wise....okay yo dirt can u make dis a bannishment battle

Banishments are not allowed.

can't boot one of you right off the site but if you both agree to it i can say loser leaves the league forever or atleast as long as i'm running it

im in a "class of my own" like "detention" was served,P.L's a injure dis herb-
u not real good with a sentence & words,u'z a fagget not da mention a bird-
u dont got da ability da be a thug look at his pic he like he from da revenge of da nerds-

ya rap's trash y invest ya bars fam,u aint leavin dis with less than scar's fam,
u gon be in "magazines"?? nah only "xl" u'll eva get in is "extra large pants"-

u probly wont show up 2 dis battle save ya lines dont waste ya nonsense-
fukk it tho ima bury u just so ya ass could apart of nature's,process

dis fagget said he wear's pink lmaooo u lil bitch nigga stick da dressin-
be4 i have u and ya family makin out more "wheels" than a intersection-(get it..will)

dis niggaz done im stoppin dis clown's shit,tired of watchin dis clown spit-
vc you a lonley nigga on rb u aint gota "crew" all u got his a "sound-click"-

u'll get hit from far da ruga his large dunn,jay who's removin dis problem??-
fuck ya family im like "nas" cuzz "i know i can" shoot at ya "god son"-

i dont wanna hear about ya guns or old cases,i hope u could swoll faces-
cuzz u scared of guns ya punk ass wouldn't even "load-bases"-

if i reach da waist,u gon be lookin like a retarded urkel when i heat ya face-
keep ya space,its 2 easy vc battlin u is like a "birthday" its a "piece of cake"-

explanation: my 3 rd line..http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=120072&page=1
^^^there go da link niggaz said he look like urkel so he got madd and deleted his pics.

whoa this nigga right here....Vc has a life outside of the internet second of all i didnt delete the pics....it says hosted by angelfire..if u knew what that meant jack ass....it means that the site found out i was posting pics using there servers and thats not allowed asshole...i didnt delete anything. i'll post or just take this lost...i aint been on site ...i'll get at you....i mean he wanted me banished or whatever if i no show b4 midnight u can banish me from the league if ya want..i mean iunno like battles that dont add to stats but more than likelyy i will still drop a hit at you..

i wish niggas woudl actually use factual information..damn emcees be trying to win with false information.....smh

lol doggy dogg pull up ya fuckin pink skirt....and spit...y da fuck would u write be a book cryin about ya gay ass pics..i aint talkin shit im just rappin nahmean so whuteva bitchin u gotta do..do it in ya bar's or suck a dick and get a glock

*Cock* ya *dic*,empty clips,chest like a glove cuz it snug the hollowz/
Fuck this emcee *spitz*,im sure this pussy more comfortable to swallow/
i'll give you the*right* of way to death at the *crossroads* intersections/
mutilate ya body cavities a*Cross* except you wont *witness* a resurrection/
This cat run around think he better than State P and shit/
well i taking ya *Dame* in action,i'll take ya melodramatic bitch/
well,i'll break ya face and shake ya brace,leave you with fractured ivory/
*Straighten* this *fabricated* mc,like it was a scene of dramatic irony/
u couldnt get more *processed* Lyrics than Jada Pinketts Hair Dresser/
i'll E MediaTely, see you with the respirator,aided on the stretcher/
MY city...... viewed ya ability.... visually nasty/
Im like the mario brothers enemies my govt nombre es Ghastly/
i'll win this by default but like romantics, get this man *lost* by nature/
this discussion is voided,motherfucker this poll is cloture/
You can *clothes* this chapter,b/c your verses been *Worn*/
Tu eres es CUIDADO,mother im telling u in dos idiomas YOU BEEN WARNED/
think u is *ill* i'll cure that mind like Parkison's/
have you gettin up angels,playin the harp~listen/
warning the trick to duck when i empty banana clips/
like Ebola,i get so sick....infect ya terminal like you was a homo sittin on AIDS dick/





thats it yo. all i coudl think off off the top of the head...im out god luck with the abttle good battle marvelousj... hottness... get at me 1.

oh yea post in here a questiont hat you might have bout my verse some of the abrs may be hard to catch i will explain them as u all have problems... hopefully yall can understand themmm..

uppin....whuts good ppl drop dem votes

breakdown for marvolous:

flow:pretty good a couple of lines i thought ws alittle off but overall good job 6/10

volcab:nice use here good balance with the rest of the verse 7/10

punches:some alright lines i liked,"be4 i have u and ya family makin out more "wheels" than a intersection" just cause it flipped the words i gave you to use good job 7/10

overall:20/30 nice verse

breakdown for VC:

flow:no off spots through the whole thing some good internal rhyming in spots too good job 7/10

volcab:a whole level above your oppenent some of the best this week in the league no hint of being basic at all 9/10

punches:good job at keeping on your oppenent no quotes cause the whole verse was full of good punches 7/10

overall:23/30

vote--close battle one of the better ones i've read this week it was close but the volcab use and punches had VC run away with it vote=VC

ay uppin for votes if yall vote ill will hit up yall abttles tooo honestly of course...if u confident you the winner hit up my battle...