Ja'e Roc vs. Neuromancer
 

blind spit
10-14 lines
45 min to drop
good luck yo

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your first day, bout to be your worse day,
i'll misplace, find an erase, your flow,

this lyrical left blow, thru your face it'll throw,
your brains, on my finger stains, oh no,

you's a jerk, no work, no doubt you'll get merked,
talkin, n talkin, i'm sick of that squackin, watch me crush this duck,

take it to ur place, my 9 milly all up in ya face,
ur called neuro, should just be called zero, you suck,

ill trash your remains, n lift this cat like cranes,
bring him to a new hieght, the ropes tight, neck snap,

you found hung, just like crack, ya got slung,
for you beatin me, no seriouslly, ya whack.

You wanna impersonate a cool J? i'll school ya to Z and rip ya asunder,
Until the only tight J you're comparable with is the grandmasta 6 feet under,
Rapid fire slugs burst through ya belly until you're really sluggish appearing,
You carry such little weight here bitch, you're on the verge of disappearing,
Fearing Neuoromancer, i'll blare flares tearing apart ya shitty roc'a'wear,
Don't even drop a verse, i'm sending you to God so write a 10-14 line prayer!,
Are you kiddin' bitch, you droppin' hot?, more like ice cream cones in Alaska,
But i'll welcome ya with open arms, if ya wrists slit this battle will go fasta!,
You're rhymes a joke, so i'll crack YOU up!, until the only thing you drop is dead,
Should'a learned to watch ya step, i'll knock ya on cement so ya have street cred!,
I killed you faggot Ja'e Roc, split ya skull, now ya wack records zero and two,
Be glad ya have the J in ya name preppy fuck, that's the only way you'll join a crew! (J-Crew)

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neuromancer has sum tight shit, luvin ya style and sum of them lyrics; "until the only J ur comparable wiv is grandmaster, 6feet under..."
but not takin it away from jae roc, u did well dawg.

vote- neuromancer

neurmancer you merked dat bitch yo check dis
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=FoReal

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vote - Neuro

Neuro took basically every category, punches, wordplay, multis, nothing very quotable in both verses, cept for the 6 feet under line from Neuro.

Neuromances, great flow sometimes, good organization, and good imagery. I can say I smiled throughout the whole verse. Ja-e Roc, you have a lot going for you, which makes me think you've been rapping for a while now, but you have one major flaw. There's no flow. I need your rhymes to match up rhythmically when you're flowing. It's just too disjointed. Keep up the elevation.

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