Gangsta Kim vs NotoriousM
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-29-05 at 02:17 PM

Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in.

NotoriousM has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-05 01:20 PM.

Gangsta Kim has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-05 01:52 PM.

yo i may not be able to post my rapin time i dont have the internet eccept in class and i got kicked out ill try thou .......
holla back..........gk

The only "NotoriousM" I C B da mirror glancin back at me
Its like I got u pussy whipped the way u givin me da win
u tried to push me tripped, raps fell right into da trashbin
With justa couple of digits left i'll finish u off
NotoriousM u make me sick, go on thinkin u not soft
Its like u got da diarehia, all your raps there shit.....
Listenin to your rhymes its like your an out-wit

is this where i post my verse? This is my first time so i dont know.............
holla back . GK

I mad a mistake .............
The only "NotoriousM" I C
B da mirror glancin back at me...........

that is to be two lines not one ....srry messed up in the post

You say you Gangsta, You ain;t got nothin on me, I'ma Drop you...
Your a lil' Bitch, a pussy, GKillaz shoulda Shot you...
I got this battle on lock to, you got no skillZ, really pitiful...
You shoulda neva signed up fo' this site B, your lyrics are dispicable...
But theres one thing thats admittable, You'll neva last in this rap game...
I'll be like Eminem, your Benzino, It's gon' turn out the same...
But theres only one to blame, and thats your dumb bitch mom, for havin' you...
Shoulda slapped her when you came out, shoulda known no one could fathom you...

Voted For: Gangsta Kim

Gangsta Kim:
The only "NotoriousM" I C B da mirror glancin back at me
2/10 - Not Good.
Its like I got u pussy whipped the way u givin me da win
u tried to push me tripped, raps fell right into da trashbin
4/10 - ok punch.
With justa couple of digits left i'll finish u off
NotoriousM u make me sick, go on thinkin u not soft
3/10 - MEH.
Its like u got da diarehia, all your raps there shit.....
Listenin to your rhymes its like your an out-wit
2/10 - Dont get it

11/40

Its was ok for your first battle, work on your wordplay and punchlines.


NotoriousM:
You say you Gangsta, You ain;t got nothin on me, I'ma Drop you...
Your a lil' Bitch, a pussy, GKillaz shoulda Shot you...
2/10 - Why?
I got this battle on lock to, you got no skillZ, really pitiful...
You shoulda neva signed up fo' this site B, your lyrics are dispicable...
2/10 - No Punch.
But theres one thing thats admittable, You'll neva last in this rap game...
I'll be like Eminem, your Benzino, It's gon' turn out the same...
4/10 - Good Punch.
But theres only one to blame, and thats your dumb bitch mom, for havin' you...
Shoulda slapped her when you came out, shoulda known no one could fathom you...
1/10 - HuH?

9/40

You had one good line, the rest was BLAH. You also need to work on punches and wordplay.

Vote - Gangsta Kim

yo t-dot ur a fucken punk...get them fucken hate votes outta here....u know i got this

This was feedback posted for Gangsta Kim
 

Good Battle - Im Not Voting!

get over your self man let ppl post how they wanna vote for who they wanna its not hate ..... you just mad cuz u ant got a vote yet .. Proude its my first battle, it sux but its better then yours. lol

Voted For: NotoriousM

You say you Gangsta, You ain;t got nothin on me, I'ma Drop you...
Your a lil' Bitch, a pussy, GKillaz shoulda Shot you...
...pretty weak;Shouldn't have brought up Gkillaz
I got this battle on lock to, you got no skillZ, really pitiful...
You shoulda neva signed up fo' this site B, your lyrics are dispicable...
...Ok
But theres one thing thats admittable, You'll neva last in this rap game...
I'll be like Eminem, your Benzino, It's gon' turn out the same...
...Uhh,1st line was ok,2nd was a little cheesy
But theres only one to blame, and thats your dumb bitch mom, for havin' you...
Shoulda slapped her when you came out, shoulda known no one could fathom you...
...decent

The only "NotoriousM" I C B da mirror glancin back at me
^weak,pointless.
Its like I got u pussy whipped the way u givin me da win
u tried to push me tripped, raps fell right into da trashbin
...wtf,even worse.
With justa couple of digits left i'll finish u off
NotoriousM u make me sick, go on thinkin u not soft
...weak,weak,weak,weak!!
Its like u got da diarehia, all your raps there shit.....
Listenin to your rhymes its like your an out-wit
..WTF IS THIS!?!,WEAK!

Well,easy call here..
Gangsta Kim,you bassically had nothing.Not one good line in that verse.Like,your last bar,an out-wit?WTF is that?Ur concept for a punch,is that he's an out-wit?
Weak verse..
NotoriousM came with some decent lines,so I'll give him the win.

Vote-NotoriousM

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Voted For: NotoriousM

Break Down-This Battle Was Weak From Both Sides.....Especially Kim's Side. The Punches Were Weak And The Personals Were Barely Even Noticable. The Structure Was Ok But The Flow Fell Off On Both Verses. Overall Notorious M Came Harder Tham Kim.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Wtf Happend To No Crew Votes That Ant Fair Man > That Vote Should Be Deteated.............