I've Been Runnin...
i've been ruunin for a while, seems like i been off track//
but im back, to attact the glamour that comes wit spitten the facts// see i watched some of these cats who supposed to b all datt// but they lack real talent an add to the numbers who wack// i've endured parents lyin in hospital beds pushin out new seeds// herbs are not wat i need caz im grass an them hoes just weeds// wat is net beef??? just some shit that i really dont need// a bunch of 14 year old kids claimin to be P A to the C// barkin up the wrong tree tryin to shut up an silence me// but the truth rises like helium for every eye to see// these cats is puss an i convey that in a literal way// im not joinin no fuckin crew, i did that back in the day// my eyes is on the prize like doctor king on the hills of GA// im focused, let some wide eyed punk try to lead me a stray// im a vet, the game i see now through experienced optics// part of the hip-hop FBI here to stop all this pop shit// i dont usually name drop but here's a bar for those who pop shit// Avalon fuck suckin why dont you jus go on an slop dick// an thats all im gonna say about that..... |
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dis was short, but sweet.....
a bunch of 14 year old kids claimin to be P A to the C// ^^fav line but yea good multies n some good punches.....hmmmm structure was iight, wordplay could b worked on a lil bit but good vocab no doubt....hmmmmmmm good piece overall.......keep it up...1 |
yup...............
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Uppin Bastards I Hate Rv Politics
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It was aight man, decent wordplay, some things seemed a little forced in plaes, but it was straight, nice flow an decent wordplay, you'll get better as you rhyme more ofetn now that ya back, 7/10 tho'
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thankxxxx for the feed
uppin |
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