DaCROZofHB vs yte grl
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10 - 15Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-16-04 at 06:28 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
yte grl has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 06:29 PM.
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I'm Ill... that's real... about to be a legend like spul...
I'll stone you to death like you smoked a whole bowl... Your of the HB... what that mean... Hoez & Bitches? What's next? Check seven third's avy... bitches get stitches... Da Croz done... Fried like the ozone... Gay & Croz yo is a homo-phone... I freeze the beef... Yo got beef with me... I leave you in the snow alone... Da Croz reminds me of Empire... you caught up on your self... Lose you get slapped... when you lay doubles of the cards your delt... You're a regular guy jackin' off poppin' bras... but there's only one diference... Ya getting off on your cousin Andrew Martz... I'm heated like pop-tarts... |
srry... I didn't finish my verse.
Mom made me get off so I just posted it. |
DaCROZofHB has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 10:37 PM.
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I rape dis bitch quickly like Im the rapverse Kobe/
Get R Kelly to Tape dis while yte grl sits back and blows me/ I dont give a Fuck if this is a woman Im gon send Double Decker Blows/ I aint gon say spit no bullshit, just let the Record Show/ Bitch gets a win, bout as often as the Clippers do/ Cuz once i get on the mic I Rip-Her Through/ My flow so hot, it keep da Keyboard constantly a 100 degrees/ She gotta freeze her name, just to post a verse on one of these/ I dominate dis woman just like we back in the 50's/ Rape her, shoot her, Throw her in jail and make dat bitch Tip Me/ |
This was feedback posted for DaCROZofHB
just leavin feedback... goddamn crozzy... that opener was SICK AS FUCK! i dig that shit big time... good battle yall
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uppin dis battle y'all, will vote on ur shit
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uppin........................somebody please vote leave a link
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Voted For: yte grl
Back for your voting pleasure I dont give a Fuck if this is a woman Im gon send Double Decker Blows/ I aint gon say spit no bullshit, just let the Record Show/ ^^^Only persoanl, best line i think. Flowed alright, off at parts. Kobe opener was pretty good. Not a lot of persoanlls or metas. pretty simple. 5/10 Your of the HB... what that mean... Hoez & Bitches? What's next? Check seven third's avy... bitches get stitches... ^^One of a few good lines. I like how you throw in people from da site n shit. Structure was pretty good. Closer was wack, opener was good. Some aiight word play, good multis. 6/10 Aiight battle some elevation needed. One |
Voted For: yte grl
I AM a legend............................................ .................... :D :hump: |
^opps.. my bad. lol meant to put feedback.......................................... ........................................
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upping............................................
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Voted For: DaCROZofHB
yte had some tight lines with the whole stone thing but if she knows things about her opponent that are personal and then disses about it she needs to let voters know, so that we know wat she's be talkin about. dac came aight i was likin the rape thing until it got to kobe cause he's been played out but i do like the kely line. girls last line was lame you always have to have a killer ender and dac for sure did im likin that alot. |
keep leavn votes on dis battle will return da fav
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