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Legion vs MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
Battle Rules: 16-18 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Topic-Burning the alphabet. VOTE ON ALL ASPECTS! (CREATIVE, IMAGINARY, EMOTION) ECT ECT. Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 03-28-05 at 10:29 AM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
Legion has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-28-05 10:03 AM.
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MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-28-05 10:04 AM.
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Colliding letters, exhale meanings to clog understanding and the brain.
Abusive, excessive controversial views are all shuffled into frame. Don’t get this twisted, as I whisk the flame, closer and closer to words. The page begins to crumble, absolve into nothing, along with vowels & verbs. Scripts delve into my mind, and extract only the important points. Tracks kids spitting show emotion, and flow through their joints. Alphabet is the code to our future, the lock and the pivotal learning. Boost the drive to want more from words, and to keep on yearning. I want to make a earning, but how can I if I cant read…or write? Dissolved love letters keep me guessing, emotions running high. Thinking about whats on that page, she loves me but I don’t understand. I cant read, or even write, how could she ever love me for who I am? In high school, I couldn’t co-exist along side or utilize the blank pages. Breaking down my education, and trying to get it right, in stages. For ages I attempted but I could never grasp the words or skill. Parents didn’t know I was unable to read, so I dreaded the phone-bill. I had to ask my friends what it said, ink diluted by the tears I wept. Then, out of the blue, the words morphed on the page, “burn the alphabet”. I wrote on topic but gave it a kind of plot toward the end, g’luck mista. |
Cause- The effect of burning the alphabets would be devastating We wouldnt know who we are, or find out what's a word in a dictionary Who would we worship>? Without the letters G-O-D What word would it be called that leaks from our bodies How would we talk or write without the alphabets? Without them, our brain would be stupid and smaller than women tits What would women call that thing that hangs from a man What would call the long things that are attatched on our hand Without alphabets i wouldnt know whats that white shit over my head I wouldnt know, what this thing called where you go to, to meet the dead Without alphabets, we wouldnt have names, just a unknown thing This is what the cause of burning alphabets would fucking bring Effect- Now that i know my alphabets, i can read and write I can now identified this things in my mouth that are white I can now identified those little people that are just like me Now i know who to go to, if i want to be saved, the man up thee I could've come dope, but i had to rush. Dan i had a dope verse until my computer crashed. |
Nice verse, upping this, lets get some votes rolling.
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This was feedback posted for Legion
I Cant Vote............................................*p ost*
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Blah uppin for votes..............................
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Voted For: Legion
easily took by legion very creative had me thinkin about my position on this site if i couldn't read or write i also liked that you didnt cuss in a deep topical it would have messed it up like it did to MA his verse was ruined by the womens tit line after that it was crap i thougth it was gona be better do to good structure but it wasnt Legion i liked that you had a story even though it was toical added depth i look forward to reading more stuff like this v/legion Legion must be an aliase since you already got your acount upgraded |
^^ Didn't You Read M/f!
My Computer Crashed.................................i Had To Rush |
No i aint a alias, you can have your own custom avatar anyway, now.
Upping. |
This was feedback posted for Legion
checkin pollsssssssssss........wordizzle..........
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Voted For: Legion
mista~you're vocabulary was very simplistic, i feel you could ahve come better then this, and you're last line was rushed,can tell you didnt put much into this piece as a whole, sorry about your comp crashing..shame legion~you had the creative, and obviously stronger verse here, your vocabulary was well written and you even put a twist into this, nice imagery in your words and descriptiveness, as well....this is without a doubt,your battle..good job both.1 |
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