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Valiant 07-25-07 01:56 PM

Valentino vs Faime S. Quotez
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 8 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-01-07 at 12:35 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 07-25-07 01:57 PM

Valentino has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-25-07 01:57 PM.

Valiant 07-25-07 01:57 PM

I rip'n'whore faggish queers who diss crews
the only dream team you've been in...
...is the one you feel asleep too.
Who da fuck is the kid,'n' why would I fear him?
I'll knock his clout back...
...And have his girl drunk drivin' and Steering
Merkin'herbs'the way I leave Faime wit Ill Quotes
find yourself a new hobbie for ur receiving nill vote
Your bars are as shit the way the girls don't get you.
why don't you elevate something else...
...umm...like your self-esteem issues.
Our Cannons bust'n'tear spines like intense backrubs
'n'leave you more wet, than butt stains in a bathtub
I'll Kipnap this fool'n bag'em , then lead him on easy
Then His ass wont be seen again like it be censored on Tv
Your lines are only dope in a pipe with your lip back
For I ain't talkin Ms. Lohan...
...When I place a Faime S. Face up In Crack

System 07-25-07 04:13 PM

Faime S. Quotez has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-25-07 04:13 PM.

Valiant 07-27-07 01:00 PM

u ready?............................................ .....

Faime S. Quotez 07-27-07 03:13 PM

You a Capo? Roflmao...


Nice Record. You ain't lose in a while, I'd say you've been poppin'
but I'ma 'give you ya first loss in a while' like Taylor did Hopkins
And I did some research. Only reason ya rec gettin' too great
yo opponents were either whack or they were missin' due dates
And c'mon, you a Capo? That's gotta be impossible, child
fuck that, you need to burn ya current one n' Capo new style*
And stop the hard talkin' in ya verse. It's hard to believe ya
when you have the same exact same as an R & B Singer!
You from Ground Zero? Awwww... I would've never bet
that must be the place where you and your skill level met
Your "Rap Star" Dreams? Don't put ya hopes in it
only way 'Capo blowin up' is if I bombed a car with Jim Jones in it
I'm a veteran, but you can be one too through ya lyricals
all you need is practice... a thousand years, and a miracle!
I'm gorin' you horrible. You stop me in rhymes? cRaZy...
cuz I just killed you... now ya crew gotta be '299 J.G'


*Capo Line: Capo/ cop a

Good Luck

Clova 07-27-07 03:28 PM

This was feedback posted for Valentino
 
My feedbak is for u mynigga keep doin ur thang fam

big daddy 07-29-07 03:42 AM

This was feedback posted for Faime S. Quotez
 
damn I wish I could vote on this battle it was really good yall both did some good verses

Young Dizzy03 07-30-07 01:41 AM

Voted For: Faime S. Quotez

I GOOTA GO WITH FLAMES ON THIS ONE, HE HAD BEETA METAS, PUNCHES AND FLOW, V HAD GOOD WORDPLAY, OVERALL NICE BATTLE

Fly-E 08-04-07 04:16 AM

Voted For: Faime S. Quotez

Yo i give my vote to u ur strucure was good!
Ur flow was nice, and i was into it the whole time!
Val ur shit was good to but i was lookin at sum other battles and u have done better but its not over till its over!

Fly-E 08-04-07 04:16 AM

Return the favor pleeze!And vote honestly so no one accuses me of sumthin i fuckin aint!

Ransum 08-05-07 07:08 PM

This was feedback posted for Valentino
 
Nice Record. You ain't lose in a while, I'd say you've been poppin'
but I'ma 'give you ya first loss in a while' like Taylor did Hopkins
aight start but been said before....

And I did some research. Only reason ya rec gettin' too great
yo opponents were either whack or they were missin' due dates
decen flow...

And c'mon, you a Capo? That's gotta be impossible, child
fuck that, you need to burn ya current one n' Capo new style*
no punch... but decent flow still...

And stop the hard talkin' in ya verse. It's hard to believe ya
when you have the same exact same as an R & B Singer!
eeeh weak diss....

You from Ground Zero? Awwww... I would've never bet
that must be the place where you and your skill level met
decent hit here thou...

Your "Rap Star" Dreams? Don't put ya hopes in it
only way 'Capo blowin up' is if I bombed a car with Jim Jones in it
nah...

I'm a veteran, but you can be one too through ya lyricals
all you need is practice... a thousand years, and a miracle!
decent flow still...

I'm gorin' you horrible. You stop me in rhymes? cRaZy...
cuz I just killed you... now ya crew gotta be '299 J.G'
eeeh but ok ending....


next...


rip'n'whore faggish queers who diss crews
the only dream team you've been in...
...is the one you feel asleep too.
ha good start...

Who da fuck is the kid,'n' why would I fear him?
I'll knock his clout back...
...And have his girl drunk drivin' and Steering
decent flow... hit was aight...

Merkin'herbs'the way I leave Faime wit Ill Quotes
find yourself a new hobbie for ur receiving nill vote
aight...

Your bars are as shit the way the girls don't get you.
why don't you elevate something else...
...umm...like your self-esteem issues.
decent personal...

Our Cannons bust'n'tear spines like intense backrubs
'n'leave you more wet, than butt stains in a bathtub
HAHAHA NICE.....

I'll Kipnap this fool'n bag'em , then lead him on easy
Then His ass wont be seen again like it be censored on Tv
good..

Your lines are only dope in a pipe with your lip back
For I ain't talkin Ms. Lohan...
...When I place a Faime S. Face up In Crack
aight ending...



to bad i cant vote but this is my feed back i'll leave ya....

but val got this 1......

Reckless 08-07-07 09:48 PM

This was feedback posted for Valentino
 
Polls ................................................

KM 08-08-07 09:18 AM

This was feedback posted for Valentino
 
....overall to me both verses were on the same level.......im gonna have to call this one a tie.....ive seen better from the both of u ....yall should maybe do another round and get it heated foreal....~1~

Faime S. Quotez 08-15-07 02:48 PM

Dang, this aint over yet?? Thanks for the votes thus far. Uppin...


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