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hidden king 05-09-06 11:15 PM

on my grind
 
on my grind i got to stay a hustla
feed my kids and look out for my mother

and my baaby brother so i stay geeed up
got a lot of cars so my pocket stay keyeed up

this my first o.m but i'll still kill it
tihting up the looe screws ike im still drilling

i stay pumping emptying shellz until
my clip holds nothing

stay wit a chick when i flip bricks
so she get dicked make the money

cause im suttin like a pimp
you whipms

cant see me catch me later.

Journal!st 05-09-06 11:20 PM

^^
what the fuck is this shit?!?!....
its an Open Mic not
NO..
"drop some ugly lines for some feed"....
DAMN...shit around here has really gone down man DAMN..

by the way your shit was off key and if anything it sucked........
also RTF on the OM's in my sig.



work out how you gon strucutre you punches and word it better homes!

Kawn Flixx 05-10-06 01:41 AM

Closed read the rules


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