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*~BaKardii~* 04-25-03 11:23 AM

::::*~Brainz Blown~*::::
 
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:::Ears ringing, rumors lingering, saying
BaKCardii's a bastard, born to faces
switched with satan, seeing things cause
I'm plastered~~~
mixed with-in, the blood with-sin, adrenaline
seepin through skin, my brains blown
to the fact that the devils me friend~~~
catastrophies on my thoughts when they rain
in my head, and you think you see tears?, nah
that's the rage that I shed~~~
I cant absorb to the fact I'm chewed and swallowed
by fright, my visions blurred to the signs
voices louder at night~~~

:::An Elm street inside my mind
but no freddy's not here, a
temporary storage organ for
my feelings an fears~~~
things propelled from my lips
would leave you silent like lambs
giving me another reason to get a
mental exam~~~
dont get it wrong I'm not crazy i just look at shyt different
fuck the world and what it's worth cause mine is torn and demented~~~
seen stampeding in the darkness, trying to get out quick
before my mind freezes time and invites me on trips~~~
but no one can hear me scream not even the 13th ghost
saying I'm a lost cause and uh, welcome to the colt~~~


:::But see my souls gone and
my brain is distorted must have
been that shot of guilt and that
anger I snorted~~~
cant understand that when i think
my thoughts is nearly contagious
and when I speak many people
cackle Jesus just save her~~~
used to wish of slit-wrists and mis-fits
in dark spaces, now I wish of pure's kiss
in dim lights with mime faces~~~
but like it says it's just a wish and me, I'm
gutter grown, but when I wake up from
the daze, dont matter my brainz blown~~~
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*~BaKardii~* 04-25-03 11:24 AM

;) ^^^^

*~BaKardii~* 04-28-03 09:38 AM

sleep huh?......^^^^^^

evilbombsquad 05-01-03 02:38 AM

deffintly feelin this. ya flow was well writ neva lettin up either. ya horror movie metaphors put in sum great imagery. i liked how this peice just grew deeper like it was evolvin. sucks foe the sleepin, but i think ya scared them away with the lenght, but a dope peice no doubt.

stAy up

*~BaKardii~* 05-01-03 11:06 AM

thnx..upppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!

Dez 05-01-03 12:05 PM

excellent flow and wordplay


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