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tornado220 08-14-06 03:37 PM

Diss To Chase Murder
 
Diss To Chase Murder

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Diss To Chase Murder

CHASE you whack to the extent your head lack rhymes
Plus you act blind must need glasses and masses of lines
No explanation for this complex situation why battle
When I fry and rattle your brain like stampeding cattle?
You live pathetic and should give credit for my batch of rhymes
Even catch some minds sleeping like yours keeping whores in line
Need help and plans while I reprimand your skills like flunkies
That fail on jobs you a stale slob dun eat bananas like munkeys
You write fake quotes you best make a notes of this ass whooping
Do bad posts and can’t add growth to your junk so I’m looping
A brown rope around your throat, like Salt-n-Peppa leave you shooping
Got a hot sculpture you best adopt this culture I’ll drop your structure
Like condemned buildings so I’m above the rim and chilling with rupture
Of your spleen couldn’t be exact or dope if I threw crack down your throat
If whackness was paper you’ll be a sad tablet with a bad habit can’t tote
Flavor in a box with a lid on it kid, you couldn’t come proper with juice
And rhyme if you had Doctor Zeus’s mind you a cartoon on the loose
Wanna be crafty as fuck but you just a daffy duck no skills at all dawg
So CHASE you disgrace your name why place the blame on my dialogue?
You whack and lame even as a hijacked plane you blow up with a flow
Corrupt sitting inside the world trade Center you are not a tower of power hoe

Spartacus. 08-15-06 04:31 AM

was aiight but needs links.

tornado220 08-20-06 05:25 PM

my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2822542)

my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showt...549#post2822549)

tornado220 08-21-06 08:22 AM

See fire from the beast but I desire some peace but this
Require a dumb feast where we all smoke dope and brisk
Coke and fine wines even got a mug for some bud really hate
Draft beer too much suds, need sincere domination and beer makes
An accommodation for this so pass the grass and a glass
Let’s get drunk on the funk and party with Bacardi the fast
Life

Critic 08-21-06 08:44 AM

How old is that, is that your current work ? !!!

Emmm sum part were good, but others well played it was alright
keep writing.

Stay up

tornado220 08-21-06 01:36 PM

P.rodigy NOT SO THESE ARE ALL NEW PUNCHLINES FEEL ME?

Wordz AhGod 08-21-06 07:01 PM

Wak....And theres a place for beef...its called the beef thread plain and simple...take that shit somewere else.

SQUAD-UP 08-21-06 09:51 PM

this was ight, you used the same words a couple times, try to stay away from that unless you are usin wordplay. but altogether i would say its a solid diss shawty.

hit me back on my jawn

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233697

Ysdat 08-22-06 03:31 PM

this is ok at best.
structure is good.
multis are forced as fuck alot of times. Your meta's (if thats what you call them) are weird, they dont even relate to what your speaking on.

This is ok, nothing great but not wack.
stay dropping.

..Sẩntẩnẩ!..™ 08-23-06 03:38 PM

wack.Elevate.nuff.sed

tornado220 08-24-06 05:02 AM

lot these whack cats like this bitch up top don't know what the word whack mean


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