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Week 4: one way 1-1 .vs boberric lyrics 1-1 -ready for votes-
Battles Up Wednesday Verses Due Saturday (16-48 bars) Agree upon a time/bar limit b4 Battle Min 1 1/2 Minutes/ Max 3 Minutes Battles Close Tuesday Night _________________________________ Personal Song .vs Personal Song CLUB BANGER _________________________________ one way (Club Banger)  .VS boberric (Club Banger) |
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you again... lol
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my bad for the day late, its not really mixed.....as club banger as a I get
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...&songID=7363104 |
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this one here really came down to who hit the topic more this week
It is supposed to be a club banger...so heres my breakdown One way-overall you werent bad on the mic man, you sort of got a different style with the way you record. but it doesnt sound bad. I think you had a good rhyme scheme. Your imagery was good, i liked your overall word usage. The chorus/hook wasnt bad. I def. think that was the part that stood out. but overall this really didnt approach me or hit me as a club banger. it just didnt hit hard enough bob-same with you. you sound great on the mic man, you got a good voice for this Your rhymes are dope as well. You put everything together well. I think you hit the topic, and had the right idea. Its just that sound, it didnt come as a club banger. It just wasnt banging. i wasn't feeling your chorus as much either. v. one way. overall it was close, i jus think one ways chorus was a little bit more clubish than bob's. close though, hopefully this will get more votes. good luck |
yeah
i was kind of pressed for time. I would of came proper I dropped one 18 bar verse and if you want to call it a chorus lol and one dropped a whole damn track on me and shit props tho man |
I didn't find either of these relatively close to a club banger, but hey.
Beat choices were okay, One way it sounded more like a punchline song than a "club" song. I don't know it was cool for listening purposes but it didn't make me say "club banger" Boberric, you have the same problem you kind of just threw together a lot of multies and such that really didn't relate to what's happening in the club, it was cool, but not for this topic. Overall if I was to say who put together a better song I'm going with one way, he had a better overall song, but neither of you did a club banger. So my vote One Way |
^ Word..
Neither of these were a club banger, but one way made the better song. Vote: one way. |
One Way wins 2-1
bob loses 1-2 |
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