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∆ P E X X 09-30-05 06:26 PM

FEATURED TRACK: "The Perfect Groupie" (clean) - Introducing "Cream"
 
Yeah, you gotta be extra grown and sexy to get down with this. Real smooth track to lay down the ambiance as you change yours and someone elses life. We added a new artist to our roster, Cream, and dude sings like Carl Thomas / Avant / Marques Huston / Omarion / THE NEW SHIT!! Baby makin music. the Rush. 1

http://therushent2.dmusic.com.

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...610&postcount=6
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J. Luth 09-30-05 06:44 PM

aiight peepin' this...

singer tight, yo... feeling his voice and shit... adlibs aiight in hook, weren't neccessary tho, but still hook tight... dope quality

first verse: dope quality too.... flow and delivery in this was nice. lol for some reason you kinda remind me of Juelz by how you flow on this. don't know why. lol Liked how dudes voice in the back, and how he did some adlibs........ liked line about how some people know the date of all the tracks you on. good shit on this verse overall... got nice voice.

hook again.....


2nd verse: oh damn, love don't cost a thing line dope... flow coo... lyrics coo too..... shit was coo... not as good as first tho, but still nice verse....

hook again......outro type shit with singer nice... dude is dope....

Overall, track was nice..... liked it..... wasn't big fan of beat tho....... shit was aiight... but as far as y'all were, y'all did your thing on it....

good shit yo..... 9/10 keep it up....... pc. one.

RTF on my track with Tizz and Decree if you could.. "Trade it all remix"
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209636

∆ P E X X 09-30-05 09:09 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by It's SPuL!
aiight peepin' this...

singer tight, yo... feeling his voice and shit... adlibs aiight in hook, weren't neccessary tho, but still hook tight... dope quality

first verse: dope quality too.... flow and delivery in this was nice. lol for some reason you kinda remind me of Juelz by how you flow on this. don't know why. lol Liked how dudes voice in the back, and how he did some adlibs........ liked line about how some people know the date of all the tracks you on. good shit on this verse overall... got nice voice.

hook again.....


2nd verse: oh damn, love don't cost a thing line dope... flow coo... lyrics coo too..... shit was coo... not as good as first tho, but still nice verse....

hook again......outro type shit with singer nice... dude is dope....

Overall, track was nice..... liked it..... wasn't big fan of beat tho....... shit was aiight... but as far as y'all were, y'all did your thing on it....

good shit yo..... 9/10 keep it up....... pc. one.

RTF on my track with Tizz and Decree if you could.. "Trade it all remix"
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209636


Thanks a lot fam. Lots of real talk in the track and appreciate the feedback. You're the second person that said they didn't liek the beat but still liked hte track a lot somehow. I can't explain it, but we'll rock with it, lol. but yo, if you think he's good now, you ain't heard nothing yet!!

Oh yeah, I'll hit that link. 1


THE RUSH!!

.Ike. 09-30-05 11:46 PM

im really lovin this cat on the hook man......dude can sing no doubt......................he really adds to the track with the ad libs n all........id love to do a track with him to be honest....

why do u remind me of scarface?....lol.....i think its the voice...i dunno.....flow is decent....presence and delivery are def there....

of course i like the beat lol....i used it for my perfect woman song....

2nd verse....i actually i actually like better...i think the flow is a lil nicer on this in some points......


overall....coo track....good job........

~Lady Fiya~ 10-01-05 12:17 AM

Dude got vocals on the chorus..... I just don't like his voice over the beat, it has to grow on you. Your first verse was decent lyrically, the flow was straight as well. Second verse, you got a better flow IMO. Your presence is good, delivery is just right for the beat, relaxed not forced.

I hope you don't think this hate cuz I ain't on that. I thought this was a pretty decent track. You can delete this if you think this beef.

Like, 1.

∆ P E X X 10-01-05 04:18 AM

Ike, you can see the effect this beat had on me man. One of the most beatuiful things I've ever heard.

Quote:
Originally Posted by ~Lady Fiya~
Dude got vocals on the chorus..... I just don't like his voice over the beat, it has to grow on you. Your first verse was decent lyrically, the flow was straight as well. Second verse, you got a better flow IMO. Your presence is good, delivery is just right for the beat, relaxed not forced.

I hope you don't think this hate cuz I ain't on that. I thought this was a pretty decent track. You can delete this if you think this beef.

Like, 1.



Why would I think honest and sometimes positive feedback is hate :huh:? Call the dogs off for once.

∆ P E X X 10-01-05 03:38 PM

To The Top for this future classic.

∆ P E X X 10-02-05 03:00 PM

Uppin for the music that brings bodies together. Speak ya mind on it!

Ltizzle 10-02-05 06:54 PM

weerd
im glad to see the singers actually good
most of the time when i peep tracks with "singers" in them, they are always half assed pieces of shit
cream actually pretty nice
props to him

beats not suttin id really do, but it aint that bad..
im liking your flow, the cream dubs were nice..
lyrics is str8
coo lil concept you got for this track..im suprised i aint think of it
your emotion/delivery is pretty much perfect, but since this is kinda a slower ladies hit type track...you should try and add a lil more charisma to your track, or jus a lil suttin more that would get the ladies like "oooh hes seeeexay" lol...
thats really my only complaint, up the charisma on the ladies track..

quality shit man, real nice...

∆ P E X X 10-04-05 05:25 AM

^^Good looks man. Looks like putting in that late night O.T. in the lab is paying off huh? ;)

Oh yeah, hit me with 2 links and I'll RTF on both in exhange for this one. Payce!!

Up for more opinions.

∆ P E X X 10-05-05 04:08 AM

If you ever got fingered on a beach ladies, or gentlemen if you ever got a warm one in an air conditioner, this is your kinda track. If you haven't...grow some pubes and come back later.

∆ P E X X 10-07-05 04:20 PM

^^yeh, what he said.

L.E 10-07-05 08:08 PM

Good shit man...

Wasn't feelin the beat, but a dope ass song all around. Liked the flow...liked the delivery...and yeah whoever's on the hook is a good singer.

Keep it up...

RTF if you have the chance...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210509

∆ P E X X 10-08-05 02:05 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Limited Edition
Good shit man...

Wasn't feelin the beat, but a dope ass song all around. Liked the flow...liked the delivery...and yeah whoever's on the hook is a good singer.

Keep it up...

RTF if you have the chance...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210509



Good looks. I'll RTF.



If you're reading this, you know what to do!

Phenom-in-all 10-08-05 05:00 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Apexx
If you ever got fingered on a beach ladies, or gentlemen if you ever got a warm one in an air conditioner, this is your kinda track. If you haven't...grow some pubes and come back later.


LMAOOOOOO!!! oooh my.... ANYways.... on to the track...

fuck what kids been sayin, beat is sexy as Vida on ex. Ya feelin this Cream cat most def. *Downloads cause the streaming is goin mad gay* Aiiight then yea, cats voice is smooth like airburshed ass. Dooms - lol... somethin I didn't expect you to be doin with this slow jam ish. Oddly enough - it came off nice as hell. First verse, flow seems a little slow on first bar, but you ride it out and verse is nice. 2nd verse. w00t @ dude harmonizin with ya lyrics on "say it in my rhymes" & "Play it in my mind". Heck ya, this shits hittin the ipod right now. feelin it. lol @ the "Have you seen her" adlibin dude does at the end. Word. Good looks fam. 1


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