Introducing Myself..
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3113992
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3113993 My Strength Is Tremendous Nuff To Snap A Bears Neck I Laugh At Those Who Fear Death - I'll Burn Cigarettes On Your Bare Chest Till Theres No Hair Left - And Go Deep Enough Till I Tear Flesh Then Liquidify Your Lungs With My New Product - Nair Breath! Vex Always Stay Flagrant - Live Day To Day In The Main Matrix Elder God Can Get Away Fuckin On The Period Of An Aids Patient! Impale Your Body With Nine Rods - Till You Stop And Cry Soft Then Put Your Last Words Under "Deathwishes" On My iPod! Turning Mockerys Of House Sitters - While I Stomp Wizards Then Mock Lizards Like Godzilla In My House Slippers! Taking On 50 Ninja Warriors - Putting Clips In Foreigners Sucking The Tits Of A Whoring Nurse - Grab Acid Take A Sip Then Pour On Ya Ghostriding A Helicopter - Laughing At Jokes From Melon Choppers If I Die I Tell And Haunt Ya - Turn Ya Face To A Christmas Tree At Kwanza! Its Ya Favorite African With Tha Philly Flow - Beatin Me Must Be Silly Bro For Really Though - I Keep My "Clan Close" Like Ghost On 9 Milli Bros And I'll Keep You Fake Bitches In The "Trenches" With My Feel Me Flow So Niggas Stay Trying To Tempt Me - With Their Flex'd Heat Even The Haters Agree Must Be Retarded To Bring Vex Beef So Stepping In My Path - Unleashed The Rage That Mike Ty Had Do You Want Impaled And Left In A White Bag - I Might Ask? So Niggas Quit Biting My Style - While I'm Fighting For Trial Call Me Papoose I'm Bulletproof Only Way Wet Is Ridin In "De-Nile"! lol |
not bad............delivery of ur concepts can use a lil work
u started off pretty hot and it kinda died down as u got towards the end....the denile wordplay is pretty played, but i like ur imagery....structure was solid.....flow was good, a lil off in some places......but i dont care My Strength Is Tremendous Nuff To Snap A Bears Neck I Laugh At Those Who Fear Death - I'll Burn Cigarettes On Your Bare Chest Vex Always Stay Flagrant - Live Day To Day In The Main Matrix Elder God Can Get Away Fuckin On The Period Of An Aids Patient! Impale Your Body With Nine Rods - Till You Stop And Cry Soft Then Put Your Last Words Under "Deathwishes" On My iPod! Turning Mockerys Of House Sitters - While I Stomp Wizards Then Mock Lizards Like Godzilla In My House Slippers! best lines to me.....great imagery, keep spittin consistent like this, and ull make classics, reminds me of me when i get on this type of ish "blindfold light till its near night// spearfight on a kite with my ear as my eye for a year till I hear sight//" - Omega keep it up |
if this the vex i know then this the dude that tought me most i know
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Looks like he didnt do a good job, because your below shit, y? Is he from BS too? |
Yes he's from BS :)
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well damn......how is it that this dude is pretty nice and the rest of yall gotta bite somethin to be nice......
smh...w/e Ryp post ya damn verse |
This Shit Is Wicked Man This is One of the Hottest pieces I seen nice Wordplay and use Of Rhyming Scheme Ill rate This 9/10
RETURN THE FAVOR ( Ghostly Rhymez SICK SHIT ) |
lol I'm busy I have it written on paper, I keep forgetting to post it......aint that a shame..
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lmao omega keep talkin bout bitin shit yet none of us have seen links to it *taps fingers* were waiting for the links for proof
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and shiest vex did a fine job teaching me most what i know i jus dont think i need to take out A game on a second rate site
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