Acuity vs E.C
 

Battle Rules: 1:00-2:00

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

fukin shit i forgot to check in my bad lol....

g'luck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-10-05 at 12:19 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

E.C has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-10-05 11:24 AM.

Acuity has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-10-05 11:29 AM.

yeh here it is... went for the laid back approach so thts y i dint show n e emotion lol hope u like :thumbup:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/e...ctionsmusic.htm

The Last Straw

ight uppin for votesss........................................

This was feedback posted for Acuity
 

I won't vote, cause Acuity just voted on mine, and I'm givin a beat to E.C., so no prejudice here. But feed: First off, both ya'll got foreign accents, so thats hard to me to judge, cause I'm Canadian, and am used to regular flow. But thats here nor there, cause you both got it.

Acuity: Flow was a little off in parts, but you had loads of personals, good research on ya guy, and way to bring it to the track. You gotta get mad more energy on ya tracks though man. Spit with some passion, and you'll be ten times the battler.

E.C.: Your flow only slipped a few times, and you rode the beat pretty good. But you were pretty weak on punches and personals. There were a few, but nothing that made me go "OOHHH SHIT!" Work on finding a line no ones heard before and shock some cats.

Quality on both was blah, but hey - do what ya can with what ya got. Good looks to both cats, keep droppin, and hope the feed is useful. 1

ight man i appriciate the feed... it didnt take me long to write ma verse i didnt spend as much time as i was hopin to spend on it...

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Voted For: Acuity

hm....... I honestly think you took this... By a LOT - more personals - stretch 2 use ya u.k accent and like i said more personals... hmmmm... U got my vote - easy

This was feedback posted for E.C
 

jus checkin.......................................