(X)eed vs 4fil
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no bullshit

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 07-14-05 at 08:55 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

(X)eed has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-11-05 08:56 PM.

4fil has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-11-05 08:57 PM.

Tell me when you've dropped......................................... then ima drop

cool avatar man!

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ aiight thnx man

Wishes to 4fil dreams, but all he does is 4fil his own wackness
Hes followin the narrow ray of light, while hes in Blackness
wouldnt 4fil nothin' even if i gave you a bucket wit half water,
his bars are stuck............. like 4fils rhymes were outta order
he 4fils destiny to its extreme source of practise
"practise makes perfect" but he perfects his own wackness
"wackness meter" "fillin" up to its maximum
ohhhhhh shit its over filled hes got a good can of ass whippin
he wouldnt get any bigger even if CAPS LOCK WAS LEFT ON
"refresh" your memory, as your page might not "respond"

If you don’t get the punches…... please screw yourself and don’t vote... :thumbup:

*Ahem*

Kid punches like real estate cause you’ll pay if they land
When they spinning your roof..... that’s when you get fans
Just face the facts boy...... you’re only in this battle to lose
Calls himself (x)ceed........ Named after the brand of shoes
Your boxed in like your “(x)” as if I’m coming in to stormya
When you accept your trapped... now eye come to cornea
I know that you bite........ you even bit one of my own lines *proofs at the bottom
He cheats and I still manage to merked him 1....2....3 times
And after those three times... I hope you came to realizes
That your only chance of winning is if you go and plagiarise


:gfy: ..... :gfy: ....... :gfy: ...... :gfy: .................... MERKED!!!

Here's my proof of when faggot here bite my own line and used it against me..... how much of an idiot can you become.....
It's the line saying "this guy gives new meaning to the word wack"
My Verse ........... His Verse (My old Alias by the way)

<marquee>(x)eed's indian and still goes round calling everyone "niggaz"</Marquee>

u FUCK DROP UR FUKIN VERSE///////HAHHE DNT WASTE TIME PHIL

done...........

wtf...ur such a fuck fill wackness aint ur werd..im allowed to use it...u fukin o fart

Voted For: 4fil

Aiight, I gotta give this one to 4fil.. His punches wernt all that but they were enough to win. Xceed, youve elevated since I last read your verses props on the new style your using. You just need to diss him on a more personal level, do a bit of research and work out what his weakness's are and then hit them with hard disses every time. The proper way to do a punch line is like telling a joke, use 2 line bars, just like cracking a joke, first line you do the set up, and second line you execute the joke with a punchline. But the set up and the punch have to connect. Once you get good at it, you can start adding in smaller disses in the set up line just for effect. But remember you always gotta be looking for bars that will make people go DAMN.. Cause thats what wins battles. Look at how some vets like L.I. and Chrit (if you search his old battles on this site) and see how they achieve it. Then come up with concepts with equal strength in your own battles. But always be origional with your stuff.

4fil, you seem to have the punchlines worked out, just needa work on making stronger ones. But you did win this battle today. Soz Xceed, just opinion bro.

v/4fil.

Peace all.

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