New love poem.
 

ur eyes of truth lips of romance fell in love wit u wit no Second Glance Im still lovin u no matter wat ur Finance thinkin of us 2 being together wit ur head layin on my chest beauty smell of Zest wit u round im neva stressed u hellped me when i was on the bench depressed now again u helped me when it was needed from all the tears I bleeded ur the reson y i succeded


so watcha think of it ppl? :thumbup:

Thats real dope. alot of feeling. good job on emotion but needs work. :)... keep em coming mayn..

Ight coo thx Legend. :thumbup:

cmon ppl im uppin for sum feedback. :thumbup:

shea. I'ma up this for you. and leave some feed when I drop. forgot to say.

Okay piece... actually very nice and brutal in its own way...