My New Shit ''took Ya Girl''
 

This one of my new/old song i never posted so its new to yall
check it out its pretty hot i got the second verse and the chorus :thumbup:

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=1427643&q=Hi

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=1427643&q=Lo

i peeped ur song-- live my life... took my grl wasn't workin....

i liked ur lyrics alot actually....

but i kinda crunched some lines.... if u work on breathing while u rap u wont have to take those breaths which lead to gaps inbetween your lines.. ya feel me?... nice though i think ur lyrics are ur strong points and nice chrorus's....

gook look though keep elevatin u got potentiontal

actually do u wanna audio battle?

i think we would be a good match up....

set it up and Pm me...

my record sucks in audio cuz i lost to Carson jet and seventhirds... <both are real ill... PM me i will prolly forget aboutt his thread.. aight