BoNe KiLLa vs D2d onE
iight ten lines max must post with in 30 minutes from first verse posted or you loose ! all other rule apply ! you need to check in before i post verse !
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Im here man, lets bein this shit,
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ayo i cant make this until tomrrow morning, so dont post up yet
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here we go.................
no worries man post when you can ! i'm not seerious bout these battles just for fun!
with that in mind HERE WE GO......................... Call your self a bone killa well I’m a kill yah ass with steal bones// You the type of hype to get shout out all night breaking into cars to steal cell phones// You could not beat me even with seventy eight up graded clones// I rip constantly through your weak chromosomes // as police block out the area around your dead corpse as a terror zone// my hole mindset is set to reflect a lethal intellect that my rhymes project// not always trying to disrespect just inspect your weak intelligence// every diss towards I, is dead~end~lessly filled with irrelevance// you lack a necessary persistence and the consequences shall make you loose your existence// your defeat in the battle is endless as my punches eternally leave you defenseless// |
hey g post up your verse tommaroow okay peace!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111
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your flows sound like shit that any asshole can crap/
iv dreamed up better flows in nightmares than shit like that/ your flows dont leave me defensless, but more of an adrenaline rush/ sayin i steal cell phones, well but your hoods known for takin it in the butt/ police from my block stop not to cuff me but say hello/ i'll play the head lead of this battle as the meastro and your just the cello/ my 78 clones of me is so that theres enuff to go around/ bitches see your face n the drop n face the ground/ its like tag but only they spray you with mace/ bitch you should take this bag and just put it over your face/ 10 -0n1- peace yall uppin for votes |
uppin for votes = feed back ! good looking out kid ! a lil late but you came thru !
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i guess that it took you a lil time to study up on my ryhme ! i usally do not even read the other cat's verse before i respond when going second ! but i guess it makes it easyier for you to feed off some one elses verse ! votes please !
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feed back and votes would be nice !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Uppin for votes yall.!
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this battle was pretty tight actually....i was feelin both y'all niggaz. but i think my votes gotsta go to d2d one cuz i was feelin his punchlines, wordplay, and his feedin all the way, i was just feelin this cat's all around style.
vote: D2d one drop an honest vote on da battles below |
alright
bone killa: ur shti was ok...nuthin special..good flow..bad structure...bad wordplay.....didnt see any personals....no punches...this was aiight 2nd one: ur shit was aiight...good personals...didnt see too many punches....ok vocab....structure was bad...ok flow vote: d2d i aint gon poll vote this until u drop a vote in my battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131811 |
uupi9n for the cause !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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still uppin
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im tired..
bone killa keep on spttin and workin on punches ull get there soon... strucutre needs improvement also.. dvd nice spit... good personals.. ok flow bad structure b... --anyways u took dis battle d2d-vote-d2d HIT THIS BATTLE UP http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132071 |
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