MONEY ON MY MIND...(hot)..
 

i wanted to finish up the last verse of a newer song but i'm mad sick right now can't quit coughin so... i'll put this lil somtin somtin for ya

MONEY ON MY MIND

links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2672456

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223294

whos doin the Screwin and Choppin of these tracks???


what you usin to record them Effects???


i was fuxin wit Screwed and Chopped on a couple of my joints...

this was solid enough... just gotta upp the delivery a Tadd...

seein the improvement... keep droppin


and Return the Favor mayne... on Mushu Da Pimp....

Flows Solid,Feeling It

the Hooks Nice,I Think Upp Your Delivery A Lil,Make It A Lil More Interesting With Your Verse,Like The EMotion,Change Your Emotion A Lil,

Your Accent Annoys Me Sorry:(

But The Hooks Nice,Feeling It

Yeah,Is There Another Dude?
Sounds Different Lol

Good Track,Upp Your Delivey A Lil

i'm 2nd verse.. tito this traxx older then the other one you heard.. i got bout 20 tracks on locktstash i havent even uploaded

k up..... i got you guys..

uh...yeah not a bad track ...you sound like a sissy...put some bass in your voice ...get more emotional...who is the other cat in this...who ever it is its better than your verse(but hey, at least you got balls enough to post up) ...you gotta get more emotional ,... get angry or something and attack the mic dog... but keep workin ... ...

balls enough to post it up... i did this song along with two other ones in one night... its twice the track you'd ever drop..

well let's see i might just have to post one now then .....hmmm.....let's see which one will it be...how long have you been at this game homie.... as you can see i've been here for about three weeks...and how many trax have been dropped ft. m.i. ...you do the math ...

its relevant youve been droppin for three weeks nuf said..

intro - screwed n chopped part is nice, but J you shoulda had the other guy spit the hook, it sounds like night and day with you in there, doesnt sound quite right...thas prolly waht the dude was sayin with get bass in ya voice

1st verse - uhh hold up i have to listen to it again cuz the dude was so monotamous i fell asleep....seriously...well for one is sounds like it was recorded in two different tracks....which isnt bad but this time you could tell deff....umm no offense, but that verse is boring...you say nothing horrible but nothing good...its just like yea yea get on with it...has not point to it. the production is pretty good tho....

SUmmers - well you upped the first guy, cuz you actually seemed like you stayed on topic, umm the multis are good, but corney at times....the only really good line is the last one...umm work on ya voice flexing a lil....like highs and lows...cuz when you said narcotics and producs, it sounded too similar, which made it sound bad....over all a decent verse

the beat wasnt bad, the screwed n chopped was a nice touch...tho ya battle against me had a better chorus...haha not a bad track tho...but you can to better lets be honest....

overall 6.5 outta 10....word

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