"Man, Woman, Child"...new concept from ya boyeee
 

http://www.myspace.com/thaqmusic


^Click on "Man, Woman, Child"



Beat: Clockwork Productions
Hook: Q
Verses: 1-3, Q


Concept: Imagine 3 people on a track, a man, a woman, and a child. All three are given the opportunity to vent on this one beat.

The hook is interesting. I literally couldn't think of anything to go because where the hook is the beat drops out. So, what you hear is what I derived out of sheer frustration with trying to come up with one.

I like this song and hope people can feel the vibe of it.

Holla


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242969
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3173949

guess this is too intellectual for this site









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Imma up this joint until I get at least 1 reply






UP!

put a soundclick one up so i can hear.

^^...http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox

Why did you take everything off your soundclick while i was gone...

WTF does anyone leave feed around here?










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this was coo i like the topic.....the beat i proly wuldnt do.....but yea lyrics deliver is all on point....i like how u did that hook........
Overall this was cooll.....good drop homie....

First of all......do something to your myspace....lol

Well, I'm not really feeling the flow/cadence of this too much to be honest with you man. Your rhyme scheme on this was a little too basic too. I think you took each verse too far man. You had a nice concept but I don't think there's enough room on one track to do what you were intending. You could have made a whole song with any one of the subjects and you tried to shove all three into one song. I think that if you were trying to shove all three points of view into a song you should have made them on the same exact topic, but from each perspective.

Anyway, not the best I've heard from you man.......but there was some good.....lol. I really liked the hook. Its simplicity worked well with the beat dropping like that and the production level sounded great throughout.


Good shit man :thumbup:

^^Preciate da feed.







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You 30+ and you still on RV? UGHHHHHHH

Why does my age concern you?

Better yet...stay out my thread.






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I'm 19 niggga so is the DUBBSSSSSSS

I did like the concept. Beat was fitting.

The delivery on this track I thought was nice...gave it a kind of desperation for the story. Flow was on point. Lyrics were sketchy in some parts, but overall, they were decent.

Good track man.