Paynimo ||vs|| Ja'e Roc
 

10 lines
due in 20 minutes after checkin
no crew
no hate
no dickrydin
gluck no feeding

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i slap a queer quick detach ligemants and where organs for bling....
i'm endin ya STING your not FIT TO WIN like YOKOSUNA returning to the ring~/~
ready to spray i'm letting this kid lay on the PAVE ak Feeding ya ANTRE
returning for seconds i'm stuffin this kid with more punches the whitneys resume~/~

switch

slippin a win threw fingers your gasping when i'm slittin ya face.......
detach and replace hand you your heart just to give you a grasp on ya FATE~/~
pay slays a virgin WINNER add number five to your LOSE COLLOM....
your over wieghed with a burden like lean challenged People trying to SHLALOM~/~

FINISH

rippin with ease i'm rappin with no vasoline this kids BOUND to FALL.....
i'm astounding all but your only masking up when your mom drags you to MASCARA BALLS~/~

get off me

u style for free, no fee, so whos a pay nimo, so you gets no denero,
1 big fat zero, far from a hero, wake ass ava, please save tha,
jokes for ya flow, oh no, i forgot son, you gots none,
plain and simple, be your spit, cute wit a dimple, but still ain't shit,
even wit dre, an em, on ya team, you couldnt make a hit, yai mean,
no pro, scared to let every body know, lyrically ya broke, only heat ya pack is a smoke
seventh line, this here battle is mine, u've been declined, better yet rewind,
save ya status, you aint near the badest, lyrically not inclined, so y waste our time,
this south paw switch up, you bout to get a stitch up, on ya eyes, shoulda reconized,
an relized, the size, knew it wasnt wise, n hay yo parental descrition is advised.

aiight uppin for votes people................................(1)

uppin for some votes............................................. ............................(2)

Punches-Ja'e Roc

Multies-Ja'e Roc

Flow-Ja'e Roc

Vocabulary-ÞAÝÑîMØ


Overall-
ÞAÝÑîMØ= 49/100 Ja'e Roc= 74/100

Ja'e Roc had more things to say and it rhymed and the majority of them were punches, also he had a better flowing verse than you ÞAÝÑîMØ, thats why he won and thats why you got a low score.

LMAO^^^^^^^lol aiight lol to bad you can't poll homie lol........uppin (3)

ayo this shit is ridiculous here its been up all day and we only got one bullshit non poll vote........changes need to be made

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