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Elegiac 11-26-05 06:58 PM

Crazy Hades vs Max McFly.
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
Crew Votes Allowed (Since we're in the same crew, just The Council)
No Recycling
No Biting


Word up..good luck.

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 11-27-05 at 06:58 AM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

System 11-26-05 07:35 PM

Crazy Hades has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-26-05 07:35 PM.

Crazy Hades 11-26-05 07:35 PM

Hurry up and get that 'shit for school' done.

(His old name was Elegiac)

Take a deep breath. Actually, I don't want to smell ya shit..
I spit hot flames, so to even out this battle go give El-a-mint.

Let's see...I'm topical, but do you have any chance? Nope...
Even in jail I'd spit hot bars...you'd intentionally drop the soap.
If you're looking to vote for Max, get the fuck out and stop herbs,
Nothin' could leave him more puzzled then when we crosswords.
Give me lip? I knew M's dream, one thing he'd want from the world.
he wanted to catch the tooth faerie, until he learned it was a girl.

In the Black Rose Tournament, we'll dominate. Others, farewell,
Adding us two, it's true together we're The Best..and you're El. *

Crazy Hades 11-26-05 07:37 PM

:\ Oops, didn't add the explanation...El = The. <<

System 11-26-05 07:55 PM

Max McFly. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-26-05 07:55 PM.

Elegiac 11-27-05 10:32 AM

Bam..
.
.
.
Murk Hades for days, ya verse way out of style, son…
So I’ma beat Crazy worse than an abusive insane asylum,
Hades is ‘soft bitch, I’ll simply leave this faggot trashed,
Cuz the only window of opportunity opened……………
……………………….And Daemon’s computer crashed,
Leave you seeing stars, the space between us will impale ya chin,
Ya punches couldn’t be outa this world if you were fisting an alien!
Slayin’ this homo apart, hear screams while I’m tearin’ ya,
So when I’m sayin’ Daemon is a retard…
……………I’m not talking about Team America!!*
Think of getting insurance? The meds will be here soon, ya wack..
Because kinda obvious Daemon would be nothing without Aflac! **

*They make Matt Damen a retard in that movie…
**Aflac- insurance company, alfac and matt damen are always in movies together..

Elegiac 11-27-05 03:59 PM

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GKillaz05 11-27-05 04:23 PM

Voted For: Max McFly.

Max McFly. - Good spit, you had some funny personals, and good wordplay, and your punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - Murk Hades for days, ya verse way out of style, son…
So I’ma beat Crazy worse than an abusive insane asylum,

Worst Line - Hades is ‘soft bitch, I’ll simply leave this faggot trashed,
Cuz the only window of opportunity opened……………
……………………….And Daemon’s computer crashed,

Crazy Hades - Your verse was iight, you had some ok wordplay, and your personals were good.

Best Line - If you're looking to vote for Max, get the fuck out and stop herbs,
Nothin' could leave him more puzzled then when we crosswords.

Worst Line - Let's see...I'm topical, but do you have any chance? Nope...
Even in jail I'd spit hot bars...you'd intentionally drop the soap.

OVERALL - This battle was pretty good, but I think Max won with the better wordplay and personals. His punches were also hitten hard. Crazy your flow was good, you had some iight punches, and your wordplay was pretty good. I just felt that Max had the better verse.

Vote - Max McFly.

RTF in SIG!

noname 11-27-05 05:44 PM

Voted For: Crazy Hades

Take a deep breath. Actually, I don't want to smell ya shit..
I spit hot flames, so to even out this battle go give El-a-mint.
..good attempt,but it's forced
Let's see...I'm topical, but do you have any chance? Nope...
Even in jail I'd spit hot bars...you'd intentionally drop the soap.
..played,heard it before in a Jin freestyle
If you're looking to vote for Max, get the fuck out and stop herbs,
Nothin' could leave him more puzzled then when we crosswords.
...good
Give me lip? I knew M's dream, one thing he'd want from the world.
he wanted to catch the tooth faerie, until he learned it was a girl.
...dope
In the Black Rose Tournament, we'll dominate. Others, farewell,
Adding us two, it's true together we're The Best..and you're El.
.....ok

Murk Hades for days, ya verse way out of style, son…
So I’ma beat Crazy worse than an abusive insane asylum,
....no,too technical
Hades is ‘soft bitch, I’ll simply leave this faggot trashed,
Cuz the only window of opportunity opened……………
……………………….And Daemon’s computer crashed,
......ok
Leave you seeing stars, the space between us will impale ya chin,
Ya punches couldn’t be outa this world if you were fisting an alien!
....good concept,but you forced it too much
Slayin’ this homo apart, hear screams while I’m tearin’ ya,
So when I’m sayin’ Daemon is a retard…
……………I’m not talking about Team America!!*
.....weak
Think of getting insurance? The meds will be here soon, ya wack..
Because kinda obvious Daemon would be nothing without Aflac
...cheesy.

Well..I think Crazy hades won this.
Max Mcfly is forcing his rhymes too much.Some of shit would be ok,but forcedness wrecked it.Like the alien/fisted one.And it also seemed like u were trying to make something off daemon/damen..but the lines turned out bad.

V/Crazy Hades

Drop an honest vote in the link below
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214286

Crazy Hades 11-27-05 06:11 PM

=\ I never got to drop the explanation that El = The in spanish. >\

H.D. 02-08-06 06:04 PM

Voted For: Max McFly.

Vulcan dominated in this battle with the far more creative punchlines... and name play personals...

"Ya punches couldn’t be outa this world if you were fisting an alien!" best line in the battle

Opener: Vulcan
Closer: Vulcan
Punches: Vulcan
Personals: Vulcan
Creativity: Vulcan
complexity: Vulcan
Enjoyment: Vulcan

Vote: Vulcan

Daubs 02-08-06 06:10 PM

Voted For: Max McFly.

If you're looking to vote for Max, get the fuck out and stop herbs,
Nothin' could leave him more puzzled then when we crosswords.
Give me lip? I knew M's dream, one thing he'd want from the world.
he wanted to catch the tooth faerie, until he learned it was a girl.

VS

Murk Hades for days, ya verse way out of style, son…
So I’ma beat Crazy worse than an abusive insane asylum,
Slayin’ this homo apart, hear screams while I’m tearin’ ya,
So when I’m sayin’ Daemon is a retard…
……………I’m not talking about Team America!!*

both had two decent lines, and both had played lines, (soap bar, alien bar)
max had the better nameplays and imo came more consistant,

decent battle, ESPECIALLY for topical/gfx heads!

NO HATE
RTF VS KING SOLO PLEASE.

dazy 02-08-06 06:12 PM

Voted For: Crazy Hades

the battle was really close u both had good flow and punches but crazy hades had the win by his line with the soap lol that was funny u guys both did good and vulcan i didnt get some lines but u did good

no hate
rtf to one of my battles

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