shadow vs atticus
ok, i just keystyled this shit.. i'ma post it now cuz you asked to battle, 10 lines cuz im tired and want to go to bed.. no d/r, hate votes etc.
good luck man |
Gun with full chamber, n you playing Russian roulette
You challenged me to a battle, shit’s what you get With this one verse, I forever change your life biography With this one punch, I rearrange your face geography facing me in a battle is worse than lucifer’s torture spit hotter than hellfire, call me the scalp scorcher least now your hairless nut sack match your top call me when you finally get a ball to drop atticus step to the stage and sadly get booed badly i locked his ass in the basement, changed his name to boo radley |
yo shit there supposed to be an emtpy line between "drop" and "atticus" but whatever, y'all get the point
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i knew u'd follow up
the hoods answer to gettin the 'burbs-clean'/ was 2 get rid edge this 'herb' by any neccessary means/ When U overcome my 'angel dust' U gain 'wings'/ check you if you 'flinch' fuck you/ att won't 'swing' at you/ he only 'kills-kings'/ Don't sing in your title matches/ you bring out the bitch in yaself/ cap you if I lose steal your belt/ and toss your 'strip of crap' on my shelf nigga/ w/e |
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upping for votes... but i dont really care about this battle, vote on my other ones damnit ^
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uppin again... be cool if i could at least get one vote ^
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Lol I Guess I Shall Return The Favor' ..
Shadows edge Got This Shit Though.. "Weak Battle" Because There Were Very Few Lines But He Took It... In Most Every Category... Punches: Shadows - Check It With this one verse, I forever change your life biography With this one punch, I rearrange your face geography facing me in a battle is worse than lucifer’s torture Flow: Shadows Had The Better Flow Stucture: About The Same - But I Liked Shadows Structure A Bit Better Multies: Shadows -- Checkity Check atticus step to the stage and sadly get booed badly i locked his ass in the basement, changed his name to boo radley Not Bad For A Closer Vote: Shadows edge |
Aiight this was one helluva battle I'm talkin like pseudo-epic (not really but w/e)
::::THA BREAKDOWN::::: Punches- Shadow had some fire fire punches and Atticus's didn't seem to hit hard at all Flow-Atticus had good lines with the exception of one (was 2 get rid edge this 'herb' by any neccessary means) that threw off his whole verse but overall i liked the structure Multis- Shadow had the only multis in this one. personals- ummmm didn't see any hehe Opener- Atticus was better by definition but it had that one hideous line in it but hey Shadow's opener wasn't that bad either Closer- Shadow Definately Shadow....that Boo Radley shit was awesome!!! VOTE-SHADOW |
shadow just owned u atticus, at least you made a feeble attemt to rhyme this time, shadow, nice punches and ur closer alone owned atticus, i hate that fucking book though.
v/shadow hit this up http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118632 |
ok u both came hard n the punches were direct but i was feelin shadows flow like the others said my vote gots 2 go 2 shadow he jus wanted it more!!1
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wow.. old battle not closed... uppin because i feel like it...
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again.....
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Yourockit!Yourockit!
crotchrocket!Yourockit! crotchrocket!Yourockit! crotchrocket! crotchrocket! |
that boo radley shits been done...and done...and done again
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