youngthug V TiLLEyEDiE
 

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ok ill spit first ah hem...

i can 'cut off your hand' so u can try to beat me single handedly..
gimmie the win soo i can say "look what he done handed me"..
you better respeck da A-Z-N before i beat ya to the dirrt..
ya punches are like using a flash light witout batteries they juzz dont work..
uve just joined and and facing me is bad do u actually expect-to-ryme?..
What the hell.. embarassing niggas good think im a jap better re-kon-ize..
a puerto mexican??what the hell what will they think of next..
i knew when i joined this shit i should have never done text..
i didnt think ya had the guts to join this site but ull leave after this, 'ouch'..
ya fukin dike i could juzz be like akinyele and put ity in ya mouth..
as long as your not like "J.S." and want me to taste yah ice cream..
I think it might b better if u dump ya friends and come on over to my team..
Down on your knees grovlin for the moderators to close this battle befo it starts..
bitch lookin for any way to ban me, get me d'qed or disbared..
since your a mCee wannabe I might as well close thiz off with a good bye..
might as well quit the bull and change your "thug" attitude into a nice guy's..

the lines end after the ".." 16 lines 8 bars... = limit

check his profile for personals and
akinyele made a song 'put it in ya mouth''
err sumpin like dat

check this, you cant touch me, so get the fuck off me,
you wanna be hard, but you like lauren hill, cause you
killin me softly, ask DJ paul how i hypnotize mindz, you
must be playin ketch up, cause you runnin be heinz, its
"55" the bomb, fuck the logo shit, your girl jump on my
dick like a pogo stick, you know what?... times up its
da deadline, you cant handle my metafives, or duck my
punch lines, ill eat this cat up like big pun at lunch time,
fuck the vocab before i burst like a bubble, if you mess
with me you know there gonna be trouble, you better
hurry and call the police on da double, my lyrics are like
aids cause they sread for sure, and if you mess with me
they're wont be any cure, enough with this im out of time,
so ima get up on, and fuck yo girl from behind.

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Pretty close battle

Tilley- You had some desent punches the best I think was ya opener. You had some shit I wouldnt even call punches in there tho. Also you came with a few personals

Yung- At first your shit was pretty dope man. I really liked the first four lines. The ketchup thing was a little played but ya flipped it in a way I hadnt seen before. Nice job on that. Its the rest of the verse that got me. I was like wtf. You started off so nice an just started rhyming with no real punches or signs of any clever shit.

OVERALL- Gotta go with Tilley he was just more consistant overall
If yung would have threw even one more really clever punch thats all it would have took

Nice battle guys

I took time on your guys battle please hit mine up with a vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106542
Thanks

heyy thats pretty good im only 13, and its my 1st time!!!..........
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Thats cool keep thinkin up clever shit lil homie you got alota potental
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umm dis battle was aight nothin really stood out from both of u dudes

TILLEY-u had a good flow and all but ya punches weren't dat creative nahmean no hate but u had some good wuns and i aint really get da personals but da ya shit was hott overall...

YUNG-umm i wasn't really feelin ya shit i aint get ya flow or nothin and ya bars was barley ryhmin nahmean but umm datz all i could say about ya verse dogg

my vote=tilleye his shit was more of a battle verse than yungthugs shithe had more punches and a betta flow but his should could of been more creative..

WUN!
WUN!

tilleyedie-had some good similies...like the akinyele line
..good choice..
few punches...though not too hard...moderate..like the last 5/6 lines.. very direct punch....
proving a point

yung-nice spit but you deviated every now and again..
not too consistent...
but u had some good punches and similies as well...
impressive for a 13 yr old....
concentrate on hit the nail next time and u
will make it

overall..gotta go wit tilleyedie though