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Forgive Me
Pretty deep shit here...Hook me up with some feed I recorded it about a year ago, but its still pretty nice.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/b...tionz_music.htm Top track :thumbup: |
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im feelin the woman in the background...the beat is definitely dope....
your flow is nice over this..its kinda different in a couple parts...but i like it.... lyrically its nice... delivery is good lol... damn man...i dont know what to tell u is wrong with this song...its a good ass song...i like it a lot...damn good song man... |
Thanx for the feed uppin this shit!!!!!!
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Samples...nice.....
flow- was ok, couldnt understand some of ya words, but quality was iffy as every1 in the cyber world, emotions felt, send me this beat ama merk it. 2nd verse was much betta.....but u got unique style when u flow is like rza kinda shit ...but overall decent track. *send me this beat* |
is this a beat you made? this is pretty cool... this aint recorded a year ago lol, this sounds new , ya flow is better than ever... overdubs are off a lil... but you got a good voice... damn i'm feelin this... chorus is cool...deep shit f'sho... 2nd verse is ill.. damn this kid might be the most under rated kid on here... yea chorus is def a strong point... i'd go mad if i didnt have my notepad.. lol good shyt... flow falls off a lil bit towards the end of this verse n u start to sound a lil like eminem lol... quality could be a lil better.. but i was feelin this yeaaaaa! holler at me if u need a kid to kill a mic with :thumbup:
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Yes, Omen I made this beat...Took me about 2 fucking days!! LOL...And yes, it was recorded last summer...Good looks on the feed from you guys...DV, get at me on aim at rapdemon and I'll send you the track...Omen, we should collab sometime :)
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^^Also learn how to give feed back..lol and on aim u are not on
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whats your aim????
Uppin this shit |
.Omen, we should collab sometime
__________________ that beat is sick.... you're beat makin skills are def improving... holler at me with a beat to jump on whenever, i'm tryin to fucks with a whole rack of heads.. i just got my new mic, quality is hella good now, so ima just try n get my shit out there for a difference audience to hear, gain some fans, everytime ppl collab the mc's gain eachothers fans if they feel 'em so... lets get it crackin n build our fanbases lol... |
i don't think u did the beat, i've heard it before, i think i heard it on mesta (mestabish) soundclick. if i'm wrong, then i apologize, but i definately heard the sample before at least. anyway, the track's pretty good, flow's on point most of it. Lyrics were good, too, can't complain, nice job.
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The beat is dope, that sample is nice...the hook is coo, lyrics are fine...stayed on topic...voice sound coo, quality isn't bad...sometimes ur flow seems off, you start slow then it seems like you try to rush in a few words to fit the beat...but none of that stands out as a huge downfall, so overall its a hot drop...keep spittin it
...I got one up "Round Of Applause..."...return the favor |
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Im sure that the sample has been flipped before, but I did this track. Good looks on the feed everyone, and favors will be returned in the morning. Uppin Thru The Fucking Roof!!! |
ok, my bad, then
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no doubt its all good
uppity uppin |
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