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****down For Me Remix - Alcatrakz . Skeez . Scenario****
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im uppin this cause i just responded to about 15 threads...lets see how many of those return the favor
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dope shit
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If You Fuckers Dont Fucking Reply I Swear Ima Fucking Fuck Someones Fucking Mug The Fuck Up
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no need to fear...fred is here...
aight, lookin forward to another ill remix... aight, your getting points tacked off...i had to scroll down and find this shit... aight...are you putting a remix mixtape together or something? just wondering. first dude. aight I just wanna start by saying you have a big part for being the first man on the track...you've gotta bring out a nice intro with your verse but it seems like you didnt really focus on that and just kinda wrote lyrics and not really focus on the structure, but that's really the only problem, everything else you did pretty good. I liked it, but it just didnt jump out at me and say, WHOA THIS KAT'S GOT SOME SKILL...not to pick on you or anything, I mean...I'd still have sex with you LOL j/p aight second dude...aight...your commercial...you sound like joe budden mixed with chingy...ouch...but it's straight...lol, I'm just fucking with you because your good with your style, just that heavy commercial songs dont appear to me...pretty nice(by the way, the honeymoon was nice, kinda brought the verse out more) third dude...wow...very versatile...talib to a bad boy song...I'm very impressed. likin it, your prononciation is really nice, good delivery, the lyrics werent as nice as they could have been...mainly because the part with beyonci and ashanti really threw it off, but it's still nice overall. good job, I'd give it 2 thumbs up...but damn...pokemon the first movie even got 2 thumbs up...soo I'll rate this 9.2/10 for a commercial track overall. it was actually near perfect, if some peeps would have gotten a little more into it and get a lil crazy with it at spots it would have been a 10...but I think it's fine. just sayin. alot of aspects were shown in this. and by the way, you make bad boy look pathetic. oh yea...I just wanted to say...when I judge a track I take everything into consideration and if I say something negative to you, dont take it wrong, I know I'm not sick at all, I suck and have a long way to come, yet. I'm just giving you my best opinions. everyone on this track did alot better than I could have done. def props. -PEACE |
Wrds Thanks For The Reply..And Imm Far From Commercial..Im What You'd Call Commercially Underground
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i didnt like this song before and i not feeling it now... nothing against you but i just dont like this song
yall kept it really simple lyrics wise ... my boy J Stout could flip the hell out of this but your flow was somewhat smooth for that i give this 2/10 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91055 |
^ight thanks for the critique
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eh this aiight..i aint realy feelin this song at all..the beat sounds like candy cane lane..and the lyrics sound circa fabo 2000..wird..try something innovative man..we been hearing hip hop like this for 10 years..its time for change ya think?..
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^thanks for the click
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hey dont take that the wrong way it's nothing against you like i said
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Why waste your fucking time then?
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ok.. i wasnt feeling the first cat really... his flow was off to me.. drawn out words sometimes to fit the beat.. not enough emotion... 2nd cat.. i dont like this style of rhymers so its hard for me to do ti properly flow was cool.. i just dont like this style of delivery ..its just me maybe sop dont take it too rough... last catr.. the best on the song.. flow chopped the end of bars a little sometimes.. like..it just could of rolled into the next line smoother but other than that solid flow wise..delivery is fairly good... but could be improved .. emotion wise i didnt always feel what i shouldve in your voice.. and some times i was definitely imprsessed jus a little spotty on that somewhat.. but overall cool shizzle.. this is an ok joint.. part of the problem is its just not my flavor... keep dropping...
and ps.. thanks for the good honest feedback on my post man.. its appreciated peace |
this was a hot track..flow was nice..quality was good...lyrics were good...hook was nice...beat was tight..all in all well put togther dope track..keep doin ya thing..i liked this alot...holla
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Yo, this was produced nicely and put together well. The second cat was the tightest on this track to me and the 3rd was also pretty tight. 1st cat was good but didn't grab my attention. Overall this song was cool. I liked the mic presence of the last 2 mc's and liked the word play of mc #3 and the lyrics of mc #2. Mc #1 wasn't bad just didn't stand out as much.
Overall-drop was descent, this isn't one of my favorite cuts but you guys produced it well. Feedback on my cut: Finishin' Moves (updated). Ghost..................... |
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