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Wreckage vs sHoTTaBoY
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Or EFFECT Votes No Recycling No Biting NO DICK RIDIN Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-16-04 at 10:29 AM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 10:31 AM.
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Nigguh On A Scale Of 1-To-10 Ya Skill Rates A ''Zero''..
..U Couldnt Drop A ''Good (Rhyme) Fella'' If Ya Names Was ''De Niro''.. With These Lyrical Disses U Need More Than Just A ''hero''... ..If U Ever Made InTo The Rap Game I'd ''Burn'' Ya' ''Cd'' Like ''Nero''... ..Nigguh I ''Laugh'' At Ya Rhymes Then (Lyrically) ''Murder'' You Like ''Dr.Giggles''... ..When I Spit Complexcitie, Ya Left ''Clueless'' Like A ''Riddle''... I'ma Cause Some Verbal ''Wreckage'' An Dispose Ya Body After The ''Carnage''... ..I'm Ya Daddy n Ashamed U Was Born, So Now U Know Why U Was In The ''Orphanage''..! |
Wreckage has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 05:00 PM.
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Your Interests are Hoops, Rhymin, Drinkin n Skee-Skee-Skeezers?//1
Girls bust out-tweezer's at the thoughta seen your "shot-a-boy"Peter//2 U wouldnt beleieve me if I ko'd U so Lemme drop this tragic-Truth'//3 I'll "Plant" You in "ORLANDO", and u still couldnt "Throw magic'Roots"//4 Jus' Look at your profile "2'guns'touchin mixing'"//5 What kinda' faggot's like there dick's 2 be hitting'//6 Says he's gettin signed,the only thing"signed"Is by his mom,for his D+"home-work"//7 "I'm Young, Black, Arrogant", do u dig holes 2, U just described a"gopher"//8 (Finishers) Your names meaning "shot-a-boy" Make u sound like a petifile gay-guy'//9 When u rap "offline" U sould like pee-wee-herman on a power-trip', Gettin vocal's touched by guys'//10 Uppin *Hes from orlando* *Orlando magics basketball" "Still in school'"his mom signs his homework" *Profile 2 guns touching eachother under 2 names of him and his "friend/lover"* The 1st line off mine is off his profile |
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Voted For: Wreckage
Your Interests are Hoops, Rhymin, Drinkin n Skee-Skee-Skeezers?//1 Girls bust out-tweezer's at the thoughta seen your "shot-a-boy"Peter//2 ^^^^^^^^^^^^ ha nice opener mayne U wouldnt beleieve me if I ko'd U so Lemme drop this tragic-Truth'//3 I'll "Plant" You in "ORLANDO", and u still couldnt "Throw magic'Roots"// ^^^^^^^^^ personal and a punch mayne nice Says he's gettin signed,the only thing"signed"Is by his mom,for his D+"home-work"//7 "I'm Young, Black, Arrogant", do u dig holes 2, U just described a"gopher"//8 ^^^^^^^^^^^^ ok nice personal and a punch plus Your names meaning "shot-a-boy" Make u sound like a petifile gay-guy'//9 When u rap "offline" U sould like pee-wee-herman on a power-trip', Gettin vocal's touched by guys'//10 ^^^^^^^ ooooooooooooo nice closa mayne word Nigguh On A Scale Of 1-To-10 Ya Skill Rates A ''Zero''.. ..U Couldnt Drop A ''Good (Rhyme) Fella'' If Ya Names Was ''De Niro''.. With These Lyrical Disses U Need More Than Just A ''hero''... ..If U Ever Made InTo The Rap Game I'd ''Burn'' Ya' ''Cd'' Like ''Nero''... ^^^^^^^^^ aight mayne nice multi'z and a punch lookin for some personals ..Nigguh I ''Laugh'' At Ya Rhymes Then (Lyrically) ''Murder'' You Like ''Dr.Giggles''... ..When I Spit Complexcitie, Ya Left ''Clueless'' Like A ''Riddle''... ^^^^^^^^^^^ aight good punch mayne word I'ma Cause Some Verbal ''Wreckage'' An Dispose Ya Body After The ''Carnage''... ..I'm Ya Daddy n Ashamed U Was Born, So Now U Know Why U Was In The ''Orphanage''..! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ aight bomb ass closa personals i dont see none punches were great wreckage edge it a lil with personals and punches shotta ur good mayne no doubt but i was eagar to find some punches and personals (didnt see none) so wreckage gets my vote cuz of punches and personals v-wreckage ~peace~ |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
shotta boy you got my vote on dis one harder hittin punches and better flow i like dat good (rhyme) fella bit lol good opening wreckage no h8 and i aint just voting shottaboy coz im battling you i honnestly do think he was better in this boost your punches and vocab a bit and supprise ppl with lines dont just write da 1st fing dat comes into ya hed work on it safe ppl |
uppin it 4 shottaboy brilliant opener!!! and much better punches but thats the best opener ive seen in a while!
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This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
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both were good but wrecker had the punches and the personals |
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
nice drop from both.......shotta..nice verse g...nice opener....some good wordplay....some nice multies...i was feelin ya punches too...overall decent verse... wreckage...u came close..cos u had the multies..but ya punches just didnt hit as hard...u had some good wordplay too....make ya punches connect wit them personals and ull be better...decent verse nice batte..but... my vote=shottaboy |
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
man this was a stucture battle:laugh: but shotta took it he had better flow and better stucture and wordplay: punches:shotta flow: no need for flow in text metas: shotta multi's: shotta vocab: shotta wordplay: wreckage vote and most enjoyed verse: shottaboy yo man return the favour in my battle verse turban the links in mys ig thanks peace |
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