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Suicide
Goin through my life, searchin through my soul
Seein my life spin completely out of control Forsakin all, tryin to do everythin myself Thinkin only of money, and how to gain wealth Leadin a miserable life, feelin depression comin on Not knowin why, I lie and wonder on my front lawn Do I really need this life I want to find the end Not knowin how to express it to any of my friends Guilt and fear arise in me, what is it I need to do End it all now or find a way to reach out to a few Mind racin, heart pumpin, my world spinnin Anger surgin, fear grippin, devil lookin grinnin Take a gun, take a knife, send myself for a ride Not knowin where I’ll end up, in this suicide Lettin this world slowly eat away at my life How can anyone alone stand through this strife To many problems, to many things to get done If I do it, who cares, I’m only a person of one Only thing to look forward to is disappointment And every day it seems there’s a fly in my ointment I can’t understand, I could do it with such ease And it would be quick, quick as a breeze Still not knowin, I approach the rooftop Gotta get rid of this pain, gotta make it stop Mind racin, heart pumpin, my world spinnin Anger surgin, fear grippin, devil lookin grinnin Take a gun, take a knife, send myself for a ride Not knowin where I’ll end up, in this suicide Standin there I realize with one final thought What of the smiles and laughter I had brought What of the times when I was truly happy What of the times I was eating with my family Then I remember at church what the preacher said His words kept on spinnin around in my head Christ loves you and will always be your friend Even when it seems the trials will never end So I prayed and asked Jesus to heal my soul And all at once my life was in His control Mind racin, heart pumpin, my world spinnin Anger surgin, fear grippin, devil lookin grinnin Take a gun, take a knife, send myself for a ride No way, no how, I’m not commitin this suicide http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2456833 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2456839 |
nice drop, good emotion, 8.5 outta 10
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pretty good piece...flow was ok, vocab was aight...an aight drop overall...keep doin ya thang homie
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thanks y'all, uppin this
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Nice dude real good keep it up 8/9
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tight drop... A lot of feelings in it 10/10
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This was good man, i needa start doing the chorus on my drops sorta. Keep it up
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