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P To Tha R! 09-27-06 05:11 PM

REAL JOINT RIGHT HERE!!!! Prah'Ject feat. Implicit - Pages In My Minds Diary
 
"Pages In My Minds Diary feat. Implicit"
www.soundclick.com/prahject

Verses: Prah'Ject
Hooks: Implicit
Intro & Outro: Prah'Ject/Implicit

***Joint dedicated to those in the struggle and my mother, this is very personal***

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234412
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234993

J.D 09-27-06 05:29 PM

nice tune this one, love the beat (skys the limitttttttttttt), P, you've got a real good flow, nd ya delivery suits this beat really well, i feel what you're sayin wit the lyrics aswell...implicit does a dooope job with the hook aswell, nice voice ya got there...good work :thumbup:

P To Tha R! 09-27-06 05:30 PM

Thanks fo the feed fam

Paranoid 09-27-06 06:04 PM

Damn this beats mad ill as fuck, not sure if this is a pop remix thing but the beat is hot. I like the topic yall used. Prahject your flow and lyrics are mad insane with this track. Your emotion shows you literally mean what you say. implicit dude I love the hook on this too that deadly singin on it. The overall track was hot fa sure I want you to send this to me cuz I love what yall been sayin in this. props for the ill track. 1

P To Tha R! 09-27-06 06:05 PM

thanks dawg....

BRIGGZY 09-27-06 06:38 PM

Beat- Skys the limit...Real nice beat...Nice choise for the Topic u done man suited it well...The singer on the hook is COLD!!! Guy has a real nice voise....Your flow is nice man, you sound real Comfortable on the beat..Lyrics from what i can hear are nice..Real Talk and Emotion is illy..

This was a nice track man, First i peeped on this site n im impressed props

-1-

P To Tha R! 09-27-06 07:55 PM

thanks fam.....

Implicit 09-28-06 01:35 AM

no doubt man. ayo lemme drop some feed on this too jus because

beat is hot. i love the original song too. skys the limit. honestly when u told me u wanted to do a track like this, i didnt know u would come this hard on it. u really let it out on this one. your flow is real nice man. i dont think u missed a beat.

good job yo. keep it up.

P To Tha R! 09-28-06 11:52 AM

Yessur man i apreciate and yo implicit u did it real dope on the hooks my dawg, you got hot quality?..whats ya process...and word fam..u made the hook dope

VatoXL 09-28-06 12:17 PM

Listen'n
Ahahaha skys the limit beat...
1st: liked this shit dog real smooth real dope...lyrics raw cuz its real shit man...i liked the concepts u touched
HoOk: Is hot but not at the sametime plain..but implicit can deff sing
2nd: Better than ur first verse.. i liked the way u approached it...lyrics raw, delivery is sick...flow is crazy...
HoOk: same
3rd: pretty much the day to day struggle an the life of a hood born kid...but everything u spoke bout was real talk an i like tthis track a lot implicit did his thing wit the singin' on the hook...but the track was hot my dude...over-all man mixin was on point 100% implicit came in real nice warmed the track wit the hook he presented....by u followin up wit the lyrics just filled out the whole entire joint man...nice topic kid my ratin 9/10

P To Tha R! 09-28-06 01:04 PM

Thanks dawg and yup jus speakin truth

P To Tha R! 09-29-06 12:56 PM

Uppin this shiiz

TonyTone 09-29-06 08:48 PM

Implicit's a fuckin singer?! fuckin A, aint nobody tell me that shit lol

Triple_N 09-30-06 09:42 AM

classic biggie beat right here....bad choice cuz people gon compare it to original which is hard to top...however u flowing to it original in ya own style....eh lyrically so far in first verse it lacks real depth...didn't really go deep wit it at all to connect the listener...hook is decent that "ooooooooo" in background was wack as hell tho...but he harmonnize koo its passable hook...if verses was deeper it would make hook seem better...ya mixing is def better tho...I see what I told u is helping....verse 2 an verse 3 same feed I gave for first verse applies...delivery was good tho...it had a nice calm intensity so A+ there, just shoulda took more time writing this an gave more detail to draw listener into story. Hook coulda been stronger if dude layered it more an sum panning...but good song...its a mixtape joint, it aint got no horrendous flaws jus some shit you could improve on.

P To Tha R! 09-30-06 12:12 PM

Thanks i apreciate it dawg and yo u was saying bout it not being deeep enuf, I geuss thats a lil true, but its on a personal tip, and sum real personal shit...like sumin my moms wud only know...but i apreciate tha feed ..1


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