"Bye To The Game"
 

http://doom.dmusic.com

Second track I recorded. Lyrically one of my favs but wanted to see what everyone else thought.


Links: I feed on about 4 tracks a day. Fucks a link!!

it'z ight u should try excerising ur lyrically abilities a lil bit more but otha then that ur all good with audio mic & sound

^^Excercize how? Variety? check "True Story of a Bad Man". Couldn't be any more differnet than this.

Thanks for the feed though. Uppin.

bump.................y'all need to ppe this...heard it a day/two ago its pretty dope...

^^good looks man. Uppin for feed from any of the 10+ people who's stuff I left feed on in the last 2 days.

Uppin for you-know-what.

iight listenin as I type-

first thing I noticed, is your vocals are really low in contrast to the beat- You have a very clear delivery and voice, and its kinda lost because the volume is so low... It could be my shit speakers, iunno. "Fuck G Unit, That's game"... lol caught that though... yea (2nd time listening by now)... it sounds like your verse gets louder as the song goes on, but in the beginning its kinda tough to understand everything you spittin- Lyrics I could make out were cool, and I agree :thumbup: - keep active...1

^^hmm. sounds pretty clear to me, but then again my sound set-up's different I'm sure. ahh hell I need a new mic. >: (