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InTeGrA 01-25-05 09:05 PM

InTeGrA vs gotaasswhoopin4u
 
Battle Rules:

5 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Vote Swaying
No Dickride Voting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-26-05 at 09:05 PM

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System 01-25-05 09:30 PM

gotaasswhoopin4u has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-25-05 09:30 PM.

System 01-25-05 09:31 PM

InTeGrA has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-25-05 09:31 PM.

gotaasswhoopin4u 01-25-05 10:13 PM

The dude is not cool, I don't think he has a clue
I mean, even ya 'Rapperz' isn't 'happy' with you
Can't roll with a hard crew, always been a groupie
'Switch' sides so much, he can do 'Booty Talk' movies
Prolly the type that get hard in his wackass raps
'Neva A Wanksta?' yeh...your probably even less that that
Check the battle stats, ya wack, nah, ya awful
Your 'SQUAD-NEVER-UP' unlike the last dude u lost to
Know you'll lose, wanna call it a draw and break even?
Cuz u made the due date 'Saturday'......................
.........................cuz youll end up on the 'weak end.'

Plz don't drop in 4 days, drop ASAP dog.

InTeGrA 01-25-05 10:58 PM

As if it's taking place on 106 & Park(not in line)
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Can't you understand, your record shows your "obsolete"
Face the facts homie, i'm as hard as cold "concrete"
Dawg your afraid show your location, cause you work in a white neighborhood with two other "slaves"
Now it figures you left to bias life masterbating in South Dakota's "Caves"
I rock the spot like I owned Rasheeda's car "stereos"
You dominate it like a car, compared to 1,000 pieces of "cherios"(1:1000)
You gettin publicity on 106 is an embarassment, cause it sounds like Omarion "singing"
E Block's the weakest link on the site! Even he said your verse was never "fufilling"
Homie you talk about ass? Dawg your born gay, like a homosexual "flamingo"
Quit the illicit rap game, ride with the dinosaurs like "Dino Dingo"

I will post defenitions of what some of these punches mean tomorrow morning for ppl that don't understand.
And to to prove that dino dingo is something of existance.

....Gone.... 01-25-05 11:11 PM

Voted For: gotaasswhoopin4u

Gotaaswhoopin4u-Alright damn homie, nice flow'z with some good punches. Personals was decent. Punches was very effctive. Wordplays you had was good, still needs elevation on that. Multi'z i did sense in your verse they was good add more, its making your verse sound and flow better.



Integra-Alright fam, good punches, but still needs elevation. You had some vocab which is good. Personals was good. Punches was good , but still needs elevation, Flow was chopped up, need to fix struture, ok?





ovrall=This battle was ok. Integra, with good vocab and punches wordplay's was good. Add multi'z fam.K? gotaaswhoppin4u your punches was decent, very creative and effective. Perosnals was good, wordplay was good but still needs elevation. Multi'z you had was nice, add more it'll make your verse sound interesting. I have to go with Gotaasswhoopin4u, basically his punches came harder, yall came good in all categorys. The only thing that didnt tied up was flow and punches and gotaasswhoopin4u, came harder in both categorys. No hate to integra, your punches was good, still needs elevation homie. Flow was chopped up fix structure. Punches came effective, but gotaasswhoopin4u came harder. No hate. peace

jr freeze 01-25-05 11:47 PM

Voted For: gotaasswhoopin4u

V/Gotaasswhoopin4u....this was a close battle but ima have to give my vote to GOt cause he came wit punchs that were creatively used an his structure was good.....integra.....u had a good verse also ur opener was good but u werent consistent wit the diss's ur structure needs werk but good verse....no hate jus elavate....
punchs=Got
Structure=Got
vocab=Integra
multi's=(none really)Got
Opener=Integra
Closer=Got
overall=Got
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

gotaasswhoopin4u 01-26-05 05:35 PM

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gotaasswhoopin4u 01-27-05 08:19 PM

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**FLEx** 01-27-05 10:31 PM

Voted For: InTeGrA

gotaasswhoopin4u you fuckin' suck shit, you said my battle was wack, listen to this:

The dude is not cool, I don't think he has a clue
I mean, even ya 'Rapperz' isn't 'happy' with you

Hahahhahaha bullshit man.....this was the worst battle ever man. no joke. props to integra only because of his car.

and gotaasswhoopin4u better watch his mouth until he gets some talent!

Peace bitch and this is the truth!

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gotaasswhoopin4u 01-27-05 10:54 PM

wow...you can atleast make it not look like a hate vote...

Did you see your punches? or lack there of? ....

MaRVJay 01-28-05 12:50 PM

Voted For: gotaasswhoopin4u

u take dis easy fam...da other dude lines is 2 fukkin long damm...and i aint get most of his bars..so

opener-gota good punch lol..integ ya second line was self glorf.
structure-gota.....integ ya shit was 2 long fam
punchlines-gota..
creativity-gota
multis-nun
wordplay-gota
personals-gota...da 4th bar
finisher-gota..good punch
enjoyed-gota....nuff said

RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL LINKS R IN MY SIG

gotaasswhoopin4u 01-28-05 04:40 PM

^ Honest vote returned.......uppin.................

M-Eazy 01-28-05 06:47 PM

Voted For: gotaasswhoopin4u

i love that name...its funny to me...NO HATE...lol...but umm
gotta-took this one with harder punches, and better structure...his lines werent stretched and he came more prepared in this one...wordplay was ill...multies were ight, but not too many...tha last bar wasnt that hot...u should elevate on that, but ur overall flow merked him
InTeGrA -ur verse was nice, but i dont understnad what u were tryna do in this battle...i dunno, but w.e it was..i wasnt feelin it. ur structure wasnt that good either...a couple lines were stretched. i liked most of ur wordplay tho, and ur vocab was ill...but i dont think u came prepared enought to win this battle...or at least take my vote. i just wasnt feelin ti fam...NO HATE...elevate tho...mainly on ur structure...ur punches landed, but not harder..and mettas were dope...u just didnt amaze me fam...
overall- i think gotta took this one with better wordplay and harder punches. and he came more prepared i think. it was like he was ready for this....


PLZ RTF on battle in sig against CJ....plz RTF too, cause i took tha time out to vote on this battle....plz do tha same..

no hate people...............1...........

illmatico 01-28-05 07:57 PM

Voted For: gotaasswhoopin4u

AssWhoopin easily won this battle... Integra, you shouldnt have made ur "punches" so complicated if you wanted votes. Dont post the explanations up after you post ur verse becuase voters wont be able to see it. Anyways, If the voters dont get ANY of ur wack punches then you dont deserve votes... end of story. Asswhoopin's verse was good tho. he had some straight punches like closer. thats what really won this for him. Integra, i dont understand how you can put quotes around the last word of every line and call it wordplay or a metaphor or somethin... ur verse was really weak man. i reccomend elavating in the cypher. and what was the whole 106th and park thing. the fact that none of your punches made sense without the missing explanation really lost this battle for you...


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