Meta4 vs ~High-Dro~
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-15-05 at 07:45 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed - went over line limit

~High-Dro~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-15-05 07:25 PM.

Meta4 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-15-05 07:45 PM.

you say you're blind, but gettin raped at 5 and suckin dick is ur bio
his name's meta4, but his bitch ass can't even compare* ta High-dro
he's from chicago, illinois, like twista and a certain horny r&b singer
u flew like an eagle when u were the last bitch he pissed on and fingered
you're a little chicago bull, too bad for you, homie, i'm a matador*
words are my sword,when we're done, your loss column will have met-a-4



LINE 1 - his profile says he's blind
LINE 2 - a metaphor compares one thing to another
LINE 3 - he's from chi-town, so are twista and r.kelly
LINE 4 - fky like an eagle was an r.kelly song
LINE 5 - chicago bulls..& a matador is a bullfighter who kills the bull
LINE 6 - matador kills bull with a sword...his amount of losses will be 4

fuck this nigga man


Theres no betta I rain drops Like a Im crucial weather//
You would'nt be close to meta if u put 2 & 2 togather//
Nigga You sleep on me I juss best to put u to bed man//
fuck it I'll put 15 to ya nugget like a carmello headband//
fuck 6 lines u could'nt tell me shit if u wuz prone to tattle//
we on tha same level
naw i'll pull out mah ass cheeks and ya'll be able to battle//
mah nigga you'll probley win wit ya spits cuz u talk mo shit//
u anit got no mama u came out ya daddy hanging off his dick//
cuz ya whole family jags and thats why ya flow is foul//
u would'nt be on mah level if was in a grave rite now.//




Over...



1. 2 and 2 equals 4 and mah name id meta4

2. Carmello number is 15 and I refering to putting bullets to his head
3. Im say that his level won't even reach mah ass
every thing should speak 4 it'self

read tha verse thats qouted

Voted For: ~High-Dro~

checkin tha pizolls, werd
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Removed

FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK, git strobe 2 take that vote away, werd

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hey meta..i already pm'd strobe to dq the vote...but yes..uppin indeed

Voted For: ~High-Dro~

V/High-Dro...this was a good battle ...high came wit punchs that were consistent an had good personals lines a lil stretched but ur diss's made up for them....meta u had a good verse but it seemed like u came to lightly u had sum played lines an not many personals but good battle to both....No Hate.....RETURN THE FAVOR
Opener=H
Closer=H
structure=H
Punchs=H
Personals=H
vocab=H
overall=High-Dro

This was feedback posted for ~High-Dro~
 

i thinku should work on ya structure... and u should make ya verse clear...give yaself some time to develope like six lines isnt enough...but i liked ya verse after i saw the explanations

uppin.............................................

Voted For: ~High-Dro~

yep, heres what i see

meta4....i dunno man, your punches are very weak....most of em seem like fillers...no creative wordplay at all, sorry, but its true, there was nothing really interesting in your verse at all,,, first bar wasnt bad, but the rest just dragged on....lot of played shit....structure and flow were ok though, but you lacked in dissin the opponent and thats what you gotta do, but your shit was just whack....no offense, but you gotta come harder next time

hy dro....probly the best ive read from you, uhh, the flew like an eagle line was blahh, didnt really fit your verse, but everything else was pretty creative....had nice plays on his name.....but matadors dont really fight with swords (they're the guys with the capes), but thats alright, you had great flow, easy to read, wordplay and vocab, nothing special, but decent....personals were what made the difference, your punch wasnt that good, but you were consistent and had hitting personals and meta didnt have either....so, you get my vote

v/hydro