young_a vs. PACASO MAC
 

iight i did it , so lets get it started oyu 1st

ok dog.....
dangerous lumber when i come to work, he's worried bout the numbers on his shirt/
fake gangsta, tuckin in his shirt, another fake thug i'm gon merk,
place under the dirt/
pric you gon give me mine,i'm the greatest, because it costs to replinish lines/
i'll brake and bend ya spine, while ya stretchin for the race i'm done already exhausted at the finishline/
well young a dog you should know of ya mom i'm takin for granted and takin advantage/
i be nuttin on her belly askin, her to make me a peanutt butter and jelly sandwich/
fuck you, fuck ya religion fuck the way you accustomed to livin/
cause i know you is a homo ready to assume the position/
where ya get ya fucken name from? a lame one, he run like Edgerrin James from where i aim from/
Browns Mills? soft shit, don't sound like ya heard of a gun a clip from where you came from

a yo dog i hear ya talk/ but it aint nothing because 1 of these 2 guns gone spark / and iam from browns mills where we push that weed and sometimes we gonna push tha e/ and if ya talk shit iam pullin 2 9z out like wayne gretski / a yo pacaso i can eat you with hot lines and meto 4z or i could heat ya with hot 9z and metal 4z / and you say iam worried about tha numbers on my shirt / you should b worried whats tucked under it jerk / so holla at tha boi young a who down 4 his / and this rap shit is my new known biz / and you really dont want none so i dont know why ya came at me talkin all twisted and fucked up / ya lucky iam calm cause iam in tha booth twisted and fucked up / but ya keep talkin twisted and fucked up / grafh 2 gone leave ya twisted and fucked up / so this my last line / and this my 1st rhyme / so from hear on out its shine time.

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pacaso mac got this wit overall better punches flow and stucture
younga ya verse is to choppy and stretched

vote = pacaso mac

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come hit this up --

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payyceee

thanks green dreamer i'm votin on everybody else shit hows bout some of ya'll motherfuckas return the favor wit ya votes

uppin for votes on this shit ya'll............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................. i'm underated ya see my fucken record but i aint gon start over as a new person fuck that but ya'll vote on this shit

pasco took this battle wit better wordplay and structure...........the other cat was just pure whackness

my vote=pasco

yo pasco u took this one, u had better flow and structer and an overall better rap
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fuck you, fuck ya religion fuck the way you accustomed to livin
cause i know you is a homo ready to assume the position
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hot line ^^

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yo pasco since i hit this up could u please hit this up wit a honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89069

^^^it would be greatly appreciated

not a good battle. Yall both need to elevate, fix yo structure and use some metaphores. Pacaso Mac came harder though. He had a pretty good flow and a few punchlines.

Pacaso Mac

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89096

hit this up wit some votes yall, cool

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Peep My Jawn...

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I'll Drop A Fair One Back...