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Big Chase Vs. R-Rated
.::Rules::. 20 Line Minimum 30 Line Maximum No Crew No Hate No D/R Checks Due By 8-28-04 Spits Due By 8-30-04 Votes Due By 9-2-04 Topic: The Greatest Gift Good Luck To You Chase! ~R~ |
.::Ch-Check::. ~R~ |
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BigChase Has Asked For A Advancement In Due Date....So When He Drops His Verse I Will Drop Mine. pEace ~R~ |
The first day of school, the impressions would carry on
On the ride my dad decided to blast some Shania songs I said turn that crap down but he smiled and blared it louder I opened the door and ran out leaving wit Can you be cool for an hour As I socialized my dad came up and said I forgot a bye kiss he left me with that and a hug, my friends never stopped the diss When I arrived home my parents asked how my day was I exploded in two They yelled back but I replied with parents most dreaded words "I Hate You" All The yelling ceased as they stood, their eyes dulled, spirits diminished Silence signified all the confusion had started but the fight had finished The next day as I woke from bed, my fathers smile no longer gleamed His words were few and lifeless, my mom even refused to be seen With my folks gone my status rose as I tormented others for theirs blunders But I missed how my dad would yell my name with conviction and love booming like thunder My life seemed better socially but for my parents happiness Id trade it all Yet my emotions I never revealed until I was home in my bed curled in a ball A week later form the incident it was 3:46 my parents unusually late It was the week before Christmas, thoughts of presents fueled me to patiently wait The nurse said I need to come into her office quick, I muttered "Oh great" Little did I know my ignorance paid the price for a section of twisted fate the call informed me my mom distracted by my former words, hysterical, crashed The 5 days in the hospital, my dads back turned towards me as she slowly passed my guilt consumed me totally but I held it in, my dad didn’t even leave the house one day coming home, the yard was crowded wit objects, my dads rage over the loss of a spouse I ran out of the car showered with tears showing my fears I had tried to suppress I looked through the boxes like there was redemption and love but there was none left A note in blood confirmed my suspicion, my heart gave way as I read(red) "YOUR HATE HAS RUINED EVERYTHING, I HATE YOU, YOU BROKE MY HEART, SHE DEAD NOW LEAVE OR YOUR DUE WILL COME, DECIDE YOUR END" crushed me as I cried to above Lost God's greatest gift, my center for living ,my life gone without unconditional love.......... sorry i got banned form the comp for a couple of days.......me and torubel plus I had no time to finish im still sneaking on and no time to ocunt lines so If theres a mistake please notify me thnx...... Thnx R for understandin and helpin me wit the due date... |
So chase wins by no-show?Its been a week.
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iono he made aa special advancement due to my buisy schedule and toruble but.......iono i think itsfair if I wait....
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Damn Man Thanks For PM Cause I Forgot About This Shit...Haven't Been On In A Minute...Work and School Got Me Busy As Fuck Well I'ma Key Sumshit Now.. Nice Drop Man. |
Patience Is Essence, Forget All The Built Up Aggression.. The Real Question Why Am I Plagued With This Obsession.. Learned A Lesson or Two In My Short Lived Life Time.. But I've Grew Up and Blew Up Turned Vital To A Flat Line.. Attack Mine..Criticize Because Understanding Me Is Fatal.. I Cradle These Unable Antics and Turn Em Into Fables.. Left In Shock Cause Biting Me Is Lethal Like Cables.. Leave You Mesmorized and Your Pitiful Mind Unstable.. Complete My Vision..This Empire To Rule Over Hip-Hop.. Fuck The Gliss From Your Wrist-Watch and Your Wack Glock.. Bitch Grab A Mic, Test Ya Flow, Write Me A Good Track.. Pull You From Hood Rat and Bring Ya Those Good Stacks.. I'm Magical With Tendicies To Get You Ahead Of Me.. Elevation Is Life..Rights Are Given To Make You Free.. But That Ass Is Mine When You Sign On The Dotted Line.. If I Want You To Have Scholiosis Bitch I'll Snap Ya Spine.. You Do What I Say and Your Schedule Revolves Around Me.. Fuck The Hood You Come From..Bitch I'm The Only O.G... You Don't Praise The Lord..You Praise This Company Label.. Everything You Gain..You Give 80 Percent To My Table.. This Is Your Dream..Everything You've Wished For.. Known World Round With Money, Fame, and Bitches Galoure.. Came A Long Way From Mopping Those Lobby Floors.. From Stacking Those Rows In The Local Grocery Store.. Won't Be Broke No More..Always Gifted With Happiness.. Just Give Me Your Soul and You Can Have All Of This.. Late Night Writtings..Sleepless Months..No Privacy... Decisions Made For You..No Freedom As I Can See.. With This Motivation Speech I Hope It Gives You Up Lift.. So Do You Agree To This Contract of Your Lifes Greatest Gift? ~R~ |
Uppin Dis Bitch...Need Votes! ~R~ |
yo ill kill erryone in this tourney lol jk i dunno but i want in
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its a torunament not a league god........................upppin plz voteo n dis....
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Fucking Tournament Isn't Going On To Next Round Till This Battle Closed...So Fuckin Vote! ~R~ |
R- nah man. some of that felt like i was readin a text battle and shit so it was very uninteresting. not much imagery and some bad lines definatly in there just wasnt feelin it at all...3/10
Chase- that was a very interesting story and it had bomb ass imagery i was just fuckin stumped to how someone could write that dope....especially a 13 year old. the tranisitions and shit was like, perfect. even tho the strechys gave u a ....9/10 not even close ...you fuckers happy now? v//bigchase |
ill come back and poll when i have my 200 posts u asses
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