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Dickard. 12-05-05 06:21 PM

Spektikul & Ysdat vs. Common & Os1ris
 


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Topic: The lost romance of war
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Os1ris 12-05-05 06:51 PM

I'm a take that word as romance...but g'luck spek and ysdat......*high fives* common..lets gooooooooooo

Spektikul 12-05-05 11:13 PM

Chicky checking, the chinese chicken.................

Ysdat 12-07-05 06:40 PM

check... may need a small extension for this but will pm mystic if needed.

Its a me.. Mario 12-07-05 10:23 PM

Blah check... and word to what ysdat said... my computer just fucking blew up so ima lil short on computer time til i buy a new one later this week

Os1ris 12-08-05 08:52 PM

^Yeah, will need an extension til Sunday,Mystic....thanks if you can give it to us!

Spektikul 12-09-05 04:45 PM

*Waits for Ysdat to get at me with his verse/ideas*

:)

...and werd to the extention.

Dickard. 12-09-05 04:46 PM

extension granted

Spektikul 12-11-05 11:10 AM

The Lost Romance of War

Presents

The Lost Pilot


Ysdat
Your face did not rot
like the others--the co-pilot,
for example, I saw him

yesterday. His face is corn-
mush: his wife and daughter,
the poor ignorant people, stare

as if he will compose soon.
He was more wronged than Job.
But your face did not rot

like the others--it grew dark,
and hard like ebony;
the features progressed in their

distinction. If I could cajole
you to come back for an evening,
down from your compulsive

orbiting, I would touch you,
read your face as Dallas,
your hoodlum gunner, now,

with the blistered eyes, reads
his braille editions. I would
touch your face as a disinterested

scholar touches an original page.
However frightening, I would
discover you, and I would not

Spek
turn you in; I would not make
you face your wife, or Dallas,
or the co-pilot, Jim. You

could return to your crazy
orbiting, and I would not try
to fully understand what

it means to you. All I know
is this: when I see you,
as I have seen you at least

once every year of my life,
spin across the wilds of the sky
like a tiny, African god,

I feel dead. I feel as if I were
the residue of a stranger's life,
that I should pursue you.

My head cocked toward the sky,
I cannot get off the ground,
and, you, passing over again,

fast, perfect, and unwilling
to tell me that you are doing
well, or that it was mistake

that placed you in that world,
and me in this; or that misfortune
placed these worlds in us.

Dickard. 12-11-05 02:13 PM

Common p/med me saying he is having comp. problems and will only be on for the next 10 minutes, if it is alright with you..there will be an extension till monday 6:00 pm eastern time.

Its a me.. Mario 12-11-05 10:59 PM

Hmm just got on to see if Os had pmed me his verse and see if i got the extention or not... i will have my computer back by tomarrow deffintly... and yeah nice drop Spek... and i mean only Spek... because i know that either you or ysdat wrote the whole thing... ... but yeah nice freeverse

Its a me.. Mario 12-12-05 12:09 AM

This is Ryan's brother... he told me to say to just give the win to spek and dat becuase he fucked up his back snowboarding and he will be in the hospital for the next couple of days...

Whats this site about?

Spektikul 12-12-05 02:40 AM

^ Go sign up for an account yo.

We be rap battling and shit.

But werd to us getting the win, close this thing.

get well soon ryans bro.

werd.

Dickard. 12-12-05 06:51 AM

Spek. & Ysdat take win.

Closed.

Moved.


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