Week 3: Civil. 2-0 .vs MegaTypezRaw 2-0
 

Check, g'luck mega

check................

lol sorrry i have to peace you in your own tourny n its only the 3rd round. ouch.





You know in this bout I’m easily placing first civils really no hero,
Hes got less of a chance to make it out alive then quotable in Fly-Es verse ZERO!
He’s the mod of the tourny, but his skills are no were near major,
In reality Civil couldn’t punch lines sparring with graph paper.
Civil nice? PLEASE, watch as with ease Mega wreck's this bitch,
Yah he's got control of this battle......cus of his modding privileges.
I don’t know what you see in your girl shes hit n u can’t beg the differ,
Cus I saw his chick through Civilize and I still wanted to brown bag her.
Punches take his head for a spin cus Mega IS destined to win,
It doesn’t make cents that ur givin out money for a tourny ur no longer in.
He throws all this money around so people will vote n post verses,
Cus that’s the only way he gets girls but really this man’s game is worthless.
He’s stressing the match all week - I’m still gonna have to give u this bruising,
for chicking in he’s a 'bold man,' but hair isn’t the only thing your gona be losing.
Look dawg your always dropin played n lame all your concepts are plain,
I just can’t help it every time I read one of your verse I go down memory lane.
He'll be in the other section of the tourny after Mega completes this defeat,
You’re not in the Jump rope this week but my punches still take em of his feet.
He's from the Garden City we could do this on his turf n he still wouldn’t survive,
Cus I'll just stomp him in the ground,
Weak bitch couldn’t push up the daisies cus he was buried alive.

Mega types raw? Shiiit, it'd be betta if you didn't write at all
I'm the one with the head ache' now, why u bangin ya head against the wall?
Snap ya legs n then ya jaw. dawg... i'd really have u feelin that shit
and i'm surprised as much as u like to go raw, that u still dont have a kid
Or even hiv. Maybe, s'cuz you STILL dont have a bitch. wack nigga get a clue.
we all know u aignt the type to like kids...cuz they act bigga than you do
Got you chokin like you a smoker, but cigs definately one w/ alot of 'types'
Thats why, the only thing i know about mega.... is he HELLA ultra light
Is ultra stronger than mega or mega stronger than ultra? Faggish lard, its ova
I know you got ya gay spirit up! but i'm not the type to walk arms around the shoulda
He love watchin men grapple. And honestly i don't like ya RAW fiasco.
But dude! It seems like you talk about dick n men, in every battle
Type thats mega gay, kid.... mega lame. You can't 'write' in the left lane drive slow
I could check in with NO LINKS, and still beat you w/ the ammount of votes
And i KNOW that its in me...
....But i dont know if i should go or even throw down 20. that'd kill this kid today.
thats why i put the jump in front of you, cuz i knew you'd try n lead the way

werd. leets get soem votes.

You know in this bout I’m easily placing first civils really no hero,
Hes got less of a chance to make it out alive then quotable in Fly-Es verse ZERO!
hahaha, oh jesus.....it wasn't all that direct or personal and wasn't worded perfectly but I laughed, no offence to them lol
He’s the mod of the tourny, but his skills are no were near major,
In reality Civil couldn’t punch lines sparring with graph paper.
wasn't feeling this
Civil nice? PLEASE, watch as with ease Mega wreck's this bitch,
Yah he's got control of this battle......cus of his modding privileges.
this was weak, I always expect a mod punch against a mod
I don’t know what you see in your girl shes hit n u can’t beg the differ,
Cus I saw his chick through Civilize and I still wanted to brown bag her.
this was ok, but wording took away from it
Punches take his head for a spin cus Mega IS destined to win,
It doesn’t make cents that ur givin out money for a tourny ur no longer in.
lol, this was ok, the sense thing was unessesary though didn't realy do anythinhg
He throws all this money around so people will vote n post verses,
Cus that’s the only way he gets girls but really this man’s game is worthless.
na
He’s stressing the match all week - I’m still gonna have to give u this bruising,
for chicking in he’s a 'bold man,' but hair isn’t the only thing your gona be losing.
doesn't really even sound the same bald and bold
Look dawg your always dropin played n lame all your concepts are plain,
I just can’t help it every time I read one of your verse I go down memory lane.
your played punches are played, especially in the last week
He'll be in the other section of the tourny after Mega completes this defeat,
You’re not in the Jump rope this week but my punches still take em of his feet.
I don't see where rope comes from or fits in there except for the end, really forced
He's from the Garden City we could do this on his turf n he still wouldn’t survive,
Cus I'll just stomp him in the ground,
Weak bitch couldn’t push up the daisies cus he was buried alive.
na




Mega types raw? Shiiit, it'd be betta if you didn't write at all
I'm the one with the head ache' now, why u bangin ya head against the wall?
this was ok, worded bad though....I liked the concept though
Snap ya legs n then ya jaw. dawg... i'd really have u feelin that shit
and i'm surprised as much as u like to go raw, that u still dont have a kid
again the concept was cool, but delivery took away from the effect
Or even hiv. Maybe, s'cuz you STILL dont have a bitch. wack nigga get a clue.
we all know u aignt the type to like kids...cuz they act bigga than you do
na
Got you chokin like you a smoker, but cigs definately one w/ alot of 'types'
Thats why, the only thing i know about mega.... is he HELLA ultra light
this was ok, but didn't really hit
Is ultra stronger than mega or mega stronger than ultra? Faggish lard, its ova
I know you got ya gay spirit up! but i'm not the type to walk arms around the shoulda
na
He love watchin men grapple. And honestly i don't like ya RAW fiasco.
But dude! It seems like you talk about dick n men, in every battle
wasn't too hard
Type thats mega gay, kid.... mega lame. You can't 'write' in the left lane drive slow
I could check in with NO LINKS, and still beat you w/ the ammount of votes
this is kinda braggish as much as it is a punch
And i KNOW that its in me...
....But i dont know if i should go or even throw down 20. that'd kill this kid today.
thats why i put the jump in front of you, cuz i knew you'd try n lead the way
lol, this was on of the better jump lines



this was a close battle, a few nice concepts all around, but wording seemed to be the problem, I have civil with one more decent line then mega also found his concepts more creative, but both of you need to beef your lines up with structure and wording.

lol sorrry i have to peace you in your own tourny n its only the 3rd round. ouch.



Quote:
Originally Posted by Final.
Fly E
How do you have NO good lines in 20.? lmfao.

Quotables:
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Quotable %:
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You know in this bout I’m easily placing first civils really no hero,
Hes got less of a chance to make it out alive then quotable in Fly-Es verse ZERO!
Yeah, this was whack man. Cuz, you know..he's NOT fly-e
0/5

He’s the mod of the tourny, but his skills are no were near major,
In reality Civil couldn’t punch lines sparring with graph paper.
Plaaayyeedd concept, sorry man, just played 1/5
Civil nice? PLEASE, watch as with ease Mega wreck's this bitch,
Yah he's got control of this battle......cus of his modding privileges.
this concept is played, again. but you worded semi decent. 2/5
I don’t know what you see in your girl shes hit n u can’t beg the differ,
Cus I saw his chick through Civilize and I still wanted to brown bag her.
rofl, dope man 5/5
Punches take his head for a spin cus Mega IS destined to win,
It doesn’t make cents that ur givin out money for a tourny ur no longer in.
meh, ok i guess 3/5
He throws all this money around so people will vote n post verses,
Cus that’s the only way he gets girls but really this man’s game is worthless.
this didn't really connect, because you set up didn't play into your punch. ok, but nothing good. 2/5
He’s stressing the match all week - I’m still gonna have to give u this bruising,
for chicking in he’s a 'bold man,' but hair isn’t the only thing your gona be losing.
Yeah, again...wording bad, pucnh played, overal..lame 2/5
Look dawg your always dropin played n lame all your concepts are plain,
I just can’t help it every time I read one of your verse I go down memory lane.
again, a played to fuck concept....wording was good though, 2/5
He'll be in the other section of the tourny after Mega completes this defeat,
You’re not in the Jump rope this week but my punches still take em of his feet.
this was ok, but your Jump rope shit wasn't properly put togeather. Like, it had so much more poetential. 3/5
He's from the Garden City we could do this on his turf n he still wouldn’t survive,
Cus I'll just stomp him in the ground,
Weak bitch couldn’t push up the daisies cus he was buried alive.
Weak man, this wasn't even a good bar, even worded right, which is wasn't really..this was a lame attempt at a punch and played to hell. 1/5


overal, wasn't that impressed. you had some good ideas. but most of your shit has been done more ways than a whores pussys.

21/50=42%


Mega types raw? Shiiit, it'd be betta if you didn't write at all
I'm the one with the head ache' now, why u bangin ya head against the wall?
lol, funny siggy play. coulda been done a lil better. but funny 4/5
Snap ya legs n then ya jaw. dawg... i'd really have u feelin that shit
and i'm surprised as much as u like to go raw, that u still dont have a kid
ROFL, that was good. coming from a guy who's always having kids..JOKES STUBBS. 5/5
Or even hiv. Maybe, s'cuz you STILL dont have a bitch. wack nigga get a clue.
we all know u aignt the type to like kids...cuz they act bigga than you do
meh, this was kinda of a let down 1/5
Got you chokin like you a smoker, but cigs definately one w/ alot of 'types'
Thats why, the only thing i know about mega.... is he HELLA ultra light
lol, i thought this was cool, not super strong or anything, but worked ok. 3/5
Is ultra stronger than mega or mega stronger than ultra? Faggish lard, its ova
I know you got ya gay spirit up! but i'm not the type to walk arms around the shoulda
this was like, an odd punch. because non of it really appied to Mega directly. But you did a good job with a punch. so ...it ended up ok 3/5
He love watchin men grapple. And honestly i don't like ya RAW fiasco.
But dude! It seems like you talk about dick n men, in every battle
lol, this was cool. You coulda put more emphaze on the wrestling shit, to make it just wreck as a punch. 3/5
Type thats mega gay, kid.... mega lame. You can't 'write' in the left lane drive slow
I could check in with NO LINKS, and still beat you w/ the ammount of votes
the set up to this punch was just garbage. the ending was ok, played to fuck concept tho. 1/5
And i KNOW that its in me...
....But i dont know if i should go or even throw down 20. that'd kill this kid today.
thats why i put the jump in front of you, cuz i knew you'd try n lead the way
this has been done already, or some type of it. so meh 2/5

ovearl. your punches were more on point. much better and less played personals than mega's


22/40=.55


i'd say Civil just brought the punches that were clever and also less played.

vote: Civil

He’s the mod of the tourny, but his skills are no were near major,
In reality Civil couldn’t punch lines sparring with graph paper.
Punches take his head for a spin cus Mega IS destined to win,
It doesn’t make cents that ur givin out money for a tourny ur no longer in.

vs.

He love watchin men grapple. And honestly i don't like ya RAW fiasco.
But dude! It seems like you talk about dick n men, in every battle


I got Mega in this one. Seriously, like what the fuck is up this week Civil. Dude, you got potential to be a good battler, and other verses I've seen have had some pretty cool wording. This week!?!?! The wording was fucking despicable. That shit was shocking for real. You need to start putting the time into the wording of punches some more for maximum execution. You should've won this, but wording fucked up your verse.

v/ - MegaTypezRaw

im not gonna break down this batlle. coz i cant be arsed.


this was a close battle i must say. both had good punches n both had shit punches in my eyes, the structure and flow on both sides were good, mega had some dutty lines in his verse made me laugh, civil had some sick ones also.

overall id say that civil won this battle.

V/Civil

i felt he came more consistant, and provided better concentps and personals.


good battle tho.

Punches take his head for a spin cus Mega IS destined to win,
It doesn’t make cents that ur givin out money for a tourny ur no longer in.

That Civilize/Civil eyes concept had potential, but I wasn't feeling the punch you had with with it.

vs.

He love watchin men grapple. And honestly i don't like ya RAW fiasco.
But dude! It seems like you talk about dick n men, in every battle

I got it even on bars. I'm not sure who I think won yet. I'll come back in a little bit and edit my post.

Civil wins 3-0

mega loses and gets sent to the jump