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Pent Up (0-0) vs I Am Unreal (0-1)
Ok so it's week 2. You must drop a minumum of 16 lines and try and keep the amount of lines even ish.
If you are unsure about the rules then click here You MUST pick a topic a topic from the following list, and you can both do different topics. Good luck and drop dope. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Topics Cleansed by Fire In Anger... I am Truly Happy Shards of a Broken Mind These Shackes are my Freedom Hope is a Tattered Flag This Love is my Pain Of Dust and Air The King in Chains Tears, Idle Tears To Find God The Moons Shadow Risen to a New Low Does the Solder Bleed as much as me? |
Check. Hope is a Tattered Flag
*Lucky*-Glad 2 see u CHecked In Man Rep AI well bro.. |
i dont want to check in but i dont see if you are suppose to or not
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A corrected profession, a selected impression besting
the holes holding whole souls where bodies lay resting Investing in pressing presses, extra, read all about it… a soldier’s known abode, flown home and didn’t doubt it Surrounded by pounding thoughts, crack rocks stonin’ me ‘Cause unless you’ve walked on the moon……………… ……………………………….You can’t comp the gravity. A wealthy man once told me not to live to be alive It’s like he was the stars and we were the stripes… I replied with denied interest, a lackluster advance Implied we lose legs for each other, but we die for a stand Slam shots of whisky, but take shots of lead to the head… Why should I bleed on the flag, just to keep the stripes red? Dying for money, poverty thriving in this country of chance… But a chance every minute… is minute in a second glance So don’t fight for money… just be patriotic and brag… Or… Know that our hope rests on those who hoist the tattered flag. |
These shackles are my freedom and I can't leave this room
Because they misuse information on issues to address you and I can't tell you why, see it's not that simple because, really, its true... The tyrants System is a lizard species with defiant little tricks like making ciggarrettes to level the life span differences They try and restrict kids that are turning into fools by brainwashing their votes into our learning institutes issues concerning distant groups only slow from warfare The constitution is kept for the president to blow his nose there homeland security says they aint supportin our health Because We're so busy being at war with ourselfs we're not financially stable. Feel the ease and cancel all things like radios and cellies 'cause their frequencies are cancer causing They fiend control; so the stock market bred their future and whenever they need money they sell or spread a rumor its just to appear stunning; like modern medicine trying to breakdown immunities and alter skeletons They call us hellions but can't tell when somethings wrong giving us catscans to provide lists of the drugs we've done rebellious music batons in their closet to make a hatred seeded Then they'll pull the plug so it feels like they relieved it what if they concieved a super race to protect our stupid nation before we were due replaced Wouldn't that be the end-all/Kill-all? And to think it'd be beause they dont defend our real laws It makes me laugh like the idea you're stronger in numbers; which ironically is why wyclef is gone till november They say to listen 'cause they've got it organized You believe it, and whats worse is how you horde their side were you not born with pride? or does TV have u hypnotized Cops were quitting until tax dollars became instant bribes but the worst is ya'll agree to stop this tom foolery yet you work everyday to continue your community |
good battle, bothe had their writings down..... Unreal had plenty of multis, us good vocab and hit the point rite on the head. Pent up was more deep, he had a good flow and a nice message behind it. This was another hard one to judge.... I like how this league is steppin their game up. Pent up, had a lil more imagery and metaphors..... aq bit longer, so he was able to express himself a lil better.... I'mma have to give this one to Unreal...... winner- I Am Unreal
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^...lol.......... you almost made it sound like you wanted to vote for pent up...?
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glad unreal knows whats real lol
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Pent this my dawg unreal he the SHIT man so dont get it twisted....
ok this battle was great both came string and very well balanced in vocab and flow and depth of emotion. ok pent yes you had somewhat of a rhymescheme but at some point your really fell of and your opener and closer were both bad...but i felt you had emoion and vocab and proffesional develpment of delivery and creative writting. 7/10 unreal you came well nice opener but closer was meh...your verse was nicely complexed and creative aswell but your emotion it fel justa little but you picked it up later as you went along so word up to that! 7.5/10 ok i vote real but this aint for reasons on him being my homie i just felt he had a better and more all around better verse. |
I AM Unreal Winsa
Pent up (0-1) I am Un real (1-1) |
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