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L.E 05-17-05 12:18 AM

The Revalation Vs. BkBrawla
 
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Topic: Incurable Disease

Good Luck To The Both Of You.

BkBrawla 05-17-05 07:20 AM

Checking in.............................................

Sean Gunner 05-17-05 10:21 AM

Checking in, px

Sean Gunner 05-20-05 11:16 PM

For the best effect of this topical, you need to get a dollar bill and place it in front of you. Once you have read this stare at it and see if you can look at it the same way.

Imprints on Life
Barries shattered by paper and ink arranged in special designs,
Changing but overall never losing its meaning to time.
With spider webs in corners and colored water to its length,
Amazing how flimsy paper could hold inside so much strength.
This paper holds worlds in it's fingers of wealth and power,
It can turn an important man into a sniveling coward.
By making some rich it gives the world to those of wealth,
Can cure sickness or spread disease to one man's health.
The imprint of evil on the front with a sign of sin in the corner,
Popularity comes with richness as does a poorness with a loner.
Parents live for it to give their children a life they wish they had,
Then when reality strikes their hearts they cry and are sad.
For their minimum wage doesn't cover the bases needed to run,
The fun they want is gone and the dreams for their children are done.
These imprints of life are amazing for one piece of paper and ink,
Can change the entire civilization and it makes you think...
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Why do we let this monster empower our minds and our souls,
How is it that if we burned this money we would still be cold?
Green with envy, well I guess we know where that comes from,
To some it means to be jealous, to others its something to do for fun.
One day maybe we will learn to let go of this demon's grasp,
Scraping at our skins to get inside make us want more from our past.
Damn the invisible monster that makes people green we call greed,
For it kills everyone inflicted, and it remains an incurable disease.

Sean Gunner 05-21-05 12:00 AM

I'm glad I didn't try hard for a no show.

BkBrawla 05-21-05 12:07 AM

^^ I'm here..........................what now mr.R! haha bout to post my verse.

Sean Gunner 05-21-05 12:08 AM

12:07 AM

Was due at 11:59, what now Bk?! :thumbup:

BkBrawla 05-21-05 12:09 AM

Still i can post my verse........Acuity man let me post my verse.....Please!?

Anyway I'm posting it. so shit.

Sean Gunner 05-21-05 12:10 AM

LE is the person in charge of this, not Acuity.

BkBrawla 05-21-05 12:11 AM

O my fault lol. Anyway still man LE can I post my verse man?....Fuck it I'm posting.

BkBrawla 05-21-05 12:44 AM

Aids.
 
*Doctor office*


I sit here in this chair with tremble hands, my stomach aches
My lips are cold chapped, worrying ness flows in my brain
I can still feel the wet lips of this oh so seductive female
I can still hear the moans…, in my ear that won’t prevail
But it was the outcome that shocked me, after it all stopped
With the question in my mind “you what?”, that hopped
Now sweats coursing down my face, with my mind in confusion
I shook my head in a “refuse” way, “no this gots to be a illusion”
My heart beat so loud, that I swore, everyone in the room heard it
No they heard my scream of agony. They saw tears, I saw result ish
Knowing in my head, that this result my life will be over soon thee
With a shake of fear, I fall and went into a dark phase, knowing
………………………………............I m carrying an incurable disease



5 hours earlier


Her skin, I touched it with a passion of love and tender
Her lips, I kissed her, …….like glue I couldn’t surrender
Her tongue, It was like pure watery wetness, so natural
Couldn’t stop myself, I was turning into porn hide into Jekyll
Her legs, so smooth and pure texture like an valuable lotion
Her moans, with passion from her vocals was like an love potion
Thrusting my penis into her vagina, just added more lust
From to the front to the back, my mind was nonplused
Then we both sleep in the darkness, with passion swarming
Struck of awareness came into play as I saw the condom
………Shining on my drawer as I woke up in the morning


Vote up!

BkBrawla 05-21-05 12:00 PM

Erm Where the votes at?.............................

MoTiF 05-21-05 07:11 PM

You already lost kid.

BkBrawla 05-23-05 09:35 PM

Lol w.e...............................Yo uppin for some votes.

L.E 05-23-05 10:06 PM

What's late is late...if you would have asked for an extension, it would have been fine...I'm giving no breaks this week for people who don't ask for exensions...

The Revelation wins due to no-show...


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