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the graveyard
pay homage, casual talk wit vague comments//
rain droplets droppin to let the pain process// detained knowledge of how this all occured// solemn wurds of how it coulda been deterred// they confer the dispute was 'bout finances// try stances until niggas wit nines advances// eyes expandin shots let off, fire the cannon// five heads landed 'fore the line start scramblin// most dart frantic, othas duck and load clips// then conmence to spray graves wit hollow tips// emotions bottled and tensed, let the anger go// as the danger slows, the settings filled wit holes// seems we killed a ghost, the suspects are gone// all along I'm sleep awakin to sounds of psalms// pamphlet in palms, cryin cause I found the answer// vowed from damper, he was bound wit cancer// |
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two links, two links fo wat?
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uppin fo feedback, ya boi c-r-y-p's bak, so sit down and read that
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uppin again, c'mon sumbodie read this and tell me wat u think
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its ight nuthin special...it sound dope on audio fo real...but overall it was kinda meaningless...be a lil more creative and hopefully u really are a gangsta or sumthin of that sort cuz most people who just do o.m's front...but anyways ur lyrics were ight they bout average..flow was dope had no problem wit flow
i'd give this a 6.5/10 more if it was more longer and creative but piece out |
hey this was pretty raw i give you props 7/10 keep elevating and keep posting hey if you can take a look at my food posioning good drop though
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