AITZ vs H.D.
 

Battle Rules:

straight up this is the rules
300 rv money to winner,
4 bars
no recyclin
no biten
no hate v/
no D/R v/
no crew v/

2days to check in, 30min to post

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-16-06 at 06:28 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win

AITZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-14-06 06:28 AM.

I’ll make you collapse like a building with c4 strapped to it
Walls like plastic, watch me melt with intensive heat you can’t handle my static
I Aim straight to hurt this light weight like a shotty against a tin can
Don’t need to reload with 1 shot I can take out your 4 men*
You give so many headaches your content isn’t necessary
It’s like the blind sighted 4 the first time being at a bird sanctuary**
Tryin to hold that you cant put enough combat in to murk this enemy
Just fall back I kill using mics as a bat now H.D. needs I.V


Exp.
*his txt record, 1 win 4 loss, just playin off of it
**his rhymes are garbage, if ppl could listen to them..or do they probally get mager headaches..a blind person, just addapting to noize, birds going off get it?

H.D. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-14-06 01:18 PM.

“A”mbitious?? ya not malicious couldn't win with a miracle & 3 wishes
“I” know ya phony, I beat ya with a term of endearment, call you my homie (clown)
“T”o tell the truth you wouldn’t be above my level straddling my roof
“Z”ip over to UrbanFlows and drop links just to show the proof

“Z”ipper-face I’m sonning you backwards and forwards, call me ya dad
“T” oo sad that in ya dreams you couldn’t rock me performing with Queen
“I” stay courageous, you stay fear like the cape, I’m taking ya booty like rape*
“A”ITZ spittin’ freestylin’ or written, I’m rippin’ this kitten, cringe whore (Cringer)


Cringer = He-man’s cowardly cat
Homie the clown was acharather on In Living Color
Dad is the same backwards and forwards… also look at the spine of my verse
Queen did a song called “We will rock you”
Booty like loot: He bet 300 points he could beat me
Cape fear is a movie
I was Contam at UF

And I rhymed dad with sad in the very next line… so don’t even try to say I didn’t rhyme

and team and queen also rhyme in the same line...

Voted For: H.D.

Vote - HD

Flow- Tie. Both catz had it.

Punches- Close, both catz had some alright punches, HD's were just a cut above.

Personals- HD got personals. AITZ had one or two personals, but HD had more, and they were better.

Wordplay- HD had it, AITZ didn't have it. HD.

Multis- Just some two syllable ones from both catz. Tie.

HD gets it...the wordplay, combined with personals and punches did it. Aitz had some alright punches but they didn't land as hard, and they weren't as creative.

Voted For: H.D.

i have to say that h.d. took this....he had some better punches and his creativity was way better, his flowed better while the other dude's was kind of ehh....just not hitting hard enough

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Come on people yall need to vote... This shit been up since Valentine's day...

Vote damn it... it ain't that hard... fucking vote people

Voted For: H.D.

H.D.:
“A”mbitious?? ya not malicious couldn't win with a miracle & 3 wishes
“I” know ya phony, I beat ya with a term of endearment, call you my homie (clown)
4/10 - Weak Opener, didnt rhyme could have hit harder.
“T”o tell the truth you wouldn’t be above my level straddling my roof
“Z”ip over to UrbanFlows and drop links just to show the proof
4/10 - First line was good, second sucked!
“Z”ipper-face I’m sonning you backwards and forwards, call me ya dad
“T” oo sad that in ya dreams you couldn’t rock me performing with Queen
5/10 - Didnt rhyme - alright punch.
“I” stay courageous, you stay fear like the cape, I’m taking ya booty like rape*
“A”ITZ spittin’ freestylin’ or written, I’m rippin’ this kitten, cringe whore (Cringer)
2/10 - Didnt rhyme, wasnt fealin' it!
15/40

You had a niice structure, and it was dope spellin' out his name, but you lacked hard hitten punches and you used no good personals. Flow was pretty tight though.



AITZ:
I’ll make you collapse like a building with c4 strapped to it
Walls like plastic, watch me melt with intensive heat you can’t handle my static
2/10 - Shitty Opener.
I Aim straight to hurt this light weight like a shotty against a tin can
Don’t need to reload with 1 shot I can take out your 4 men*
3/10 - Bad.
You give so many headaches your content isn’t necessary
It’s like the blind sighted 4 the first time being at a bird sanctuary**
4/10 - NO.
Tryin to hold that you cant put enough combat in to murk this enemy
Just fall back I kill using mics as a bat now H.D. needs I.V
5/10 - Was sick. Could have worded it better.
14/40

You had an ok flow, you used some ok personals, no really good punches or wordplay in your verse though.


OVERALL: This was a close battle, which is surprisin' becuz H.D. Should have flat out WHORED this cat. But he still gets the vote for the better flow, he used better punchlines as hell. Aimz nothin' really stood out in your verse, you need to up your rhymes and your punches and wordplay. No Hate.

Vote - H.D.

^ see this is the type of bullshit I be talking about... and people be askin' me why I leave an explanation with every rhyming word in it... talking about it's unnecessary... is it really? then why can't this site [b]Vet[b] see the rhymes in my post... and drop that dumb ass vote?


So since it appears to be needed here's an explaination of what rhymes...

Ambitious, malicious & wishes... All rhyme multiple time
Phony, & homie... also rhyme multiple times
Truth, roof, & proof... all rhyme
backwards, & forwards... rhyme as do "dad", & "sad"....
dreams, & Queen... also rhyme
cape, & rape... also rhyme
spittin’, written, & kitten... all rhyme multiple times

^ so know that every rhyme is broken down for you to see... I don't wanna see no more... HD's verse didn't rhyme bullshit ass votes... weather they're for me or not....

Got damn why does it take sooooooo long for people to vote here...
and ya wonder why MC's lost interests in this site?

Voted For: H.D.

muthafucka you killed him... no hate to Aitz, but H.D. wnt harder on wordplay and creativity with that AITZ shit, also your punchlines wuz harder, and that Dad/Aitz wuz crazy.... H.D. gets my vote

structure flow////H.D.
punchlines/////H.D.
wordplay////H.D.

thankx for votin'... uppin' 4 more votes..........