~~~Aint no stopping Death~~~
 

jes lettin yall know, if u see a line ending with "~" and the other line starts with "~" is jes indicating that theres not really a pause between the lines, or a really really short pause

ight

keystyled

My mind's filled with hate thoughts that create plots to raid spots~
~And generate shots from the .38 tossed~
~To me, from my man Jay who've slaid more heathens
Than Buffy the Slayer does creature-like demons
Seasons of bloodshed and chaos purges my heart
Till a luminous beam descends from the heavens dividing the darkness apart~
~In two halves returning a state of equilibrium to my soul
My cerebrum cannot hold 'n' when medievel drums start to roll~
~The man on the pale horse has arrived to remove all forms of Godliness~
~Bringing with him, the other three horsemen of Apocalypse
Aint no stopping this....we all gots to die...
So say your last prayers...*click click*....goodbye


if ya'll really ponder on it, ull get the story.....

can i get some feedback on this joint man, would really appreciate it

bro i was definetly feelin that, maybe its just that it flowed really
well wit the beat that i was listening too, but i think that was tight yo,
keep droppin,
[]Deace

thnx fo tha feed, lets get some more feed on this shit

hit dis post up yo

dont sleep on this

I was feeling what you was writing about. .I think your structure needs some work man. .Your vocab was very good & the highlight of this piece. .The rhymes were basicly complex. .I mean no inters of multis but long words. .no doubt it flowed well . . Props