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MarvolousJ1009 Vs FatAL_LyRikzZ
Check Check...U Know Rules
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jea..checkin....now u gota check in and first da 3 is a t.k.o soon as u check in ima drop
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Alright Yo Check CHeck(IN)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..........
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beefin with jay? nah u not able da size of my gun a make u tear quick-
u "take bars from da cat in da outlaws" datz y they call u "fatal lyrikzz"- (think about it) i got some dude in cali dat clap ya moms then clap u and ya sista- ya record's sad u couldn't get a "strong win(d)" if u battled in a "twister"- after im done clappin da ratchett,ya fam a be at ya wake grabbin ya casket- quit rap u just makin a "ass" out yaself on da "net" like u "sat in da basket"- you say u nice? i cant tell by ya record u gotta convience me yo- dogg cuzz u suck and u got no "hott-lines" no more like "ms.cleo"- u think u could jay?? nah i'll dump trey's and probly sit in a cell- i could give a fukk if niggaz is gassin u and say ya spittin is well- dunny but after i "bus(t)" all u gettin is a "1 way ticket" da hell- ya boys aint gon be "throwin pennie's in water" but they gon be in a hospital "wishin" u "well"- ya verse is 2nite dunn.. |
Fatal Is My Game Aint Believe Me Read My Name
Actin Like You Dont Know After This U Better Run FOr Shame Time Is Tickin Like A BomB ima KO YOu After This I Leave Ya "MESSED UP" Like A Bad Hair-Do LEavin You ROtting Like Corpses Gettin Rotten Leavin You Mysterious In Public U Gonna Get Forgotten Y Would you Want To Battle Me IN The First Place Really,Thou I Leave My FingerPrints Planted In YA Face Ill is My Game Just Check These BARS Counting So Many Wins I Cant Even Count That Far Keepin It Real Never Fake I Remain To Stay Dope You Hearin This ? Zoomin So Fast Next Time Read My Name FATAL LYRIKzZ You Like That LOL |
IITE Votes NOw PLzZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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lol nigga did a song....dat was creative tho...UPPIN 4 VOTES PPL
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Uppin For VOTES !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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PLz Uppin For Votes I Will RETURN THE FAVA !!!!!!!
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Upppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnn Vote Ppl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........
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I'm Goin For Fatal, He Got Better Flows
He Lives Up To His Name But Marvelous Had A Wack Flow And Confusin His Rhymes Were Big Ass Words And His Lines Were Too Big It Takes Time To Read It This Is My Rating: Fatal:7/10 Marvelous:0/10 |
Alright 1-0 Appreciate The Vote...............Still Uppin
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this is an obvious win yall come on.
BREAKDOWN FATAL u didnt even battle man that was a verse bout ur self and a weak one at that, a battle is supposed to be against the other guy not juss all self-glorification. come on now. MARVOLOUSJ u murdered this man, wat a shame. u wasted such a verse on this. sick verse homeboi. the punches were hard. flow was aight tho. the metas, vocab, multis, and wordplay were all off the chain VOTE-MARVOLOUSJ |
Alright 1-1 Still Uppin THOU !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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opener-Marv.
strcuture-Fatal & Marv. both on that one, well done punchlines-Fatal creativity- Fatal personals-Marv. "i got some dude in cali dat clap ya moms then clap u and ya sista- ya record's sad u couldn't get a "strong win(d)" if u battled in a "twister"-" The overall is self-explanitory, sorry dawg but But as for the topic of battling go I am going to have to go with Marv, cause he stuck to the topic of battling and that is very important. |
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