Re$TricTed vs MetaPhysik
 

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no c h dr votes
blind spit
i set it up so yea
and bring your long
stretched bars

edit: dont no show

LoL 12 O Clock Tomorrow....

LMAO...How About Due In The Next 10 Minutes...

Sounds Good To Me

~R~

.::Checkity Check::.

Yo Kid...I AM Ready To Spit Now...Are You?

I Just Typed This Shit In The Last 4 Minutes..So Whats up?

~R~

I CAN DROP NOW....You?

drop then i wont no show

Man I Have Been Grounded From The PC...

But Its Monday and I Am Finally In School To Get A Chance..

Hate Going First But I Am Not No-Showing...Had This Done Since I Posted On 04-30-04, 04:57 PM...


Aiyo Take Your Time..Cause I Know You Gone See My Spit and Just Write Ya Ish Better

pEace

^^^lmao anyway......

Aight check it

Stricts great, no, hes dope cus hes the LBC Text Champion and on a mixtape..
Your ready to loose...like virgins in sex tapes, ya recs fake, get it in shape..
.....Well..... your bars anyway....but......didnt you say..

I would get on ya crew Eminem but...I like 3.0.4.'s,..oops, I forgot..thats you..
Only time this herb has a chance of winning....is playing the lotto wit plants..
..Give Stricts neck a slit and slant...not talking bout whats inside his pants..
You break mics, could touch ya post and still couldnt feel your verse and flow..
Kid blows, hes rich cus he has a $ sign in his name,guess he stacks dough..
Like selfish pot smokers he never pass L's, hit wit eggs like shot wit shells..
My method is murderous,ha,but if I murder this herb my method is goin to hell






If you didnt know
Eminem..Murderous Methods (his crew)
304...his area code (also spells hoe..look at it upside down)
And click on the links also...personal punches

lmfaaaaaaaao

V/ meta` punches were way better, other cat didnt feel much .. that intro .. wtf.. its text yoooo.. work on your punches to .. they were weak .. meta takes this

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

yo yo yo y'all
fuckin tight ass battle playas!!

check it
i was feelin both verse in this shit and i gotta say both y'all were throwin mad punches.
both y'all had ure own flow goin on and the structure of ure spits was all good and there wasn't a clear winner in that department.
i think re$tricted had a better rhyme scheme in his spit and he had better wordplay goin on, but meta just came more personal on this shit.
meta got creative and used numerous links which i think is cool. personals go to meta cuz he came way harder in his spit and multis was really another tie i think.

i give this battle to meta cuz basically he came more harder with the personals and in a rap battle that is really the main focus point in rippin ure opponent
so my vote - metaphysik!!

return the fave on my battles
links in the sig.

Upiin for more votes..
drop links and we'll peep
them honestly..

Wtf....i wld vote but im in restricteds crew...so soz guys

uppin for votes.

Uppin For Votes..

~R~

aight check it...

Re$ricted
Flow:7/10
wordplay:7/10
vocab:5/10
punches:6/10
creativity:6/10
opener:6/10
closer:6/10
overall:43/70

comment:aight it was hott and all but i wasnt really feelin it ya know...

fav/line:the opener

metaphysik
Flow:7/10
wordplay:8/10
vocab:7/10
punches:7/10
creativity:7/10
opener:7/10
closer:8/10
overall:51/70

comment:i was just feelin ur flow more and ur punches were hitting harder..

fav/line:
You break mics, could touch ya post and still couldnt feel your verse and flow..//
Kid blows, hes rich cus he has a $ sign in his name,guess he stacks dough..//

v/meta

no hate

Man I Have Been Grounded From The PC...
KID U SHOULD NOT EVER SAY THAT IN A BATTLE IT DOESNT HELP U LOL


Check Dis Shit...

Aiyo...3...2...1....

Aight..Check It...

Da Flow Peeps, Feel Me..

Check It..3...2...1...
WTF WAS THAT SHIT? MAN....

This Cats Man-Hood Is Strapped-Back, Mindboggled With Trapped-Raps,
Hear Your Back Crack, With Two Lyricals Smacks From This Spittin Crap/
HEAR UR BACK CRACK,I LIKE THAT.....BUT...TRAPPED RAPS/SPITTIN CRAP DOES NOT RHYME............

I Ain't Trying To Fuck With This Bitch, He's Been Around Da Block,
Flopping Wit Stocks, Syphlis Infested, Cause Too Many Herbs Riding His Cock/
HAHA,SYPHILIS LINE IS DECENT...

Gettin Your Name Well-Known, Shit Only Cause The Greatest Merked You,
Disturbed You, My METAS Will Haunt Your PHYSICS Like A 9'o Clock Curfew/
DONT LIKE THE CURFEW LINE.......U COULD'VE HIT HIM HARDER WIT HIS NAME

No 'Bodies' Impressed With The Punches Your Spitten, There Not Well Driven,
Non-Lyrical Hitting, 12 Tomorrow, Shit Dog Its Freestyle, Not Well Written/
WELL THOSE PREWRITTEN PUNCHLINES ARE PLAYED..EVEN THOUGH IN THIS CASE IT IS A PERSONAL

You Challenging Me, Is Like Comitting Suicide, It's Just Not A Smart-Move,
Repping Da MM Crew, Cause These Murderous Methods Leaving You Lead Threw/
VERY WEAK CLOSING........
~R~


Stricts great, no, hes dope cus hes the LBC Text Champion and on a mixtape..
UR STYLE IS DIFFERENT....IT TAKES A MINUTE TO CATCH UR FLOW...

Your ready to loose...like virgins in sex tapes, ya recs fake, get it in shape..

.....Well..... your bars anyway....but......didnt you say..
FLOW FALLIN OFF A LOT MAN.........
Quote:
Originally Posted by Re$TricTed
Stretched Bars Allowed...and Centering Allowed Too..


I would get on ya crew Eminem but...I like 3.0.4.'s,..oops, I forgot..thats you..
Only time this herb has a chance of winning....is playing the lotto wit plants..
DECENT PUNCH....BUT I REALLY DONT LIKE THE FLOW
..Give Stricts neck a slit and slant...not talking bout whats inside his pants..
You break mics, could touch ya post and still couldnt feel your verse and flow..DECENT PUNCH,BUT CONCEPT IS PLAYED
Kid blows, hes rich cus he has a $ sign in his name,guess he stacks dough..
Like selfish pot smokers he never pass L's, hit wit eggs like shot wit shells..
My method is murderous,ha,but if I murder this herb my method is goin to hell


OK SOME FEEDBACK..I WASNT TOO IMPRESSED WITH EITHER VERSES........
UMM.....I DEFINITELY LIKED RESTRICTED'S FLOW AND MULTIES BETTER...META...UR FLOW IS EXTREMELY HARD TO READ......IN AUDIO THIS MIGHT SOUND AIGHT......BUT IN TEXT.......UR KILLIN UR PUNCHES WIT UR HORRIBLE FLOW......OK THE PLANT LOTTO LINE WAS PRETTY ORIGINAL......BUT THE SEX TAPE,FEEL UR VERSES, N EGG SHELLS THOSE ARE PLAYED CONCEPTS.............I STILL FEEL UR PUNCHES WERE HARDER....BUT UR FLOW......MAN,I REALLY WAS NOT FEELIN IT........U WENT ON N ON BEFORE THERE WAS A WORD TAHT EVEN RHYMED,N WHEN I GOT AROUND TO IT I HAD TO GO BACK TO SEE WHAT IT RHYMED WITH........IF U HAD RESTRICTED'S FLOW N MULTIES U'D WIN THIS WITH EASE...BUT UR FLOW TOOK AWAY SO MUCH.............I'M ALWAYS ONE TO SAY PUNCHES WIN BATTLES...BUT U RUINED UR PUNCHES .....U NEEDA REALLY LOOK OVER UR SHIT N TRY TO READ IT FROM SOMEONE ELSE'S PERSPECTIVE......I READ IT A FEW TIMES.......I HAD TO READ METAS MANY TIMES TO CATCH THE FLOW..............U ONLY TOOK IT BY A MARGIN,I FIRST CAME OUT UNDECIDED N WAS GONNA POST A TIE,BUT THEN U DID HAVE BETTER PUNCHES......SO U TAKE IT.........BUT MAN,WORK ON FLOW.....

DISAPPOINTED IN THIS BATTLE

uppin poll should be 4-0 by the way