tim dim vs the s!zz
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

good luck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-07-05 at 11:08 PM

Must drop verse in 2420 minutes after check in.

tim dim has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-05 06:54 AM.

the s!zz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-05 07:06 PM.

Shit g.. why’d you bother messin with me
Only time your lyrics are at large is when you push the shit key
Funny thing is your verse doesn’t count for shit
You’d have to eat it for it to even amount to shit
This kid can’t fuck with me it’s like he had a vasectomy
It’s like you got no legs the way you don’t watch your step homie
My words have you ripped to shit, bitch just quit
Your styles more bit than p diddy’s tooth pick
Fo shiz you’ll never make it in this rap bizz
Fuck it. Sizz aint nuttin/nothing, yea he cant even jizz

if you don't get my puches I dont care vote anyway and if you dont know what a vesectomy is look it up.. lol

lmao I meant shift key not shit key in tht 2nd line

Sorry I took so ling. I got a lot of shit I'm doin lol. YOu got this battle probably though cuz I was to stressed. I think I put up a fight though. I hope.

Another battle , win or lose, Tim Dim guess which way I'ma send you,
How do you think I can lose to an MC named from your local chinese menu?
I'm makin this win quick, have this dude thinkin it was only a dream,
Revved up like capuccinos, got the sugar, I'm the pigeon shittin the cream,
Makin you look dumb, embarassment ain't covered by your Insurance Provider,
Pastor finish the exorcism, after this encounter you won't be a Soul survivor,
Wins against me come few and far between, non-existent like prehistoric animals,
Gettin Chinese on some Tim Dim, eating this nigga like a pack of wild cannibals,
At the end of the day the best man wins and believe it I plan to be the winner,
Cuz after readin this verse and losing you'll be bowing me like a repenting sinner,

Upiin this mane...this shit was pretty good...I almost ran outta time...damn gf lol

Voted For: the s!zz

s!zz- Ok with the lines kind of extended out and you kinda also could have been made more since, and wtf with the big sig. Good punches ok with the words but winner and sinner? Try a little better with that one overall ok with the flow and everything just like a normal battle.


tim dim- short lines just like quick spit? wasn't a verse no hate but elevate...and elevate. and elevate read peoples verses then come back and work on yours..... you need everything flow wordplay i could go on forever, oh ya one more thing elevate

Yea I had to rush this cuz I had literally 5 minutes to post this shit up. I was busy. Doing shit. And shit. Shit. Uppin.

Voted For: the s!zz

Shit g.. why’d you bother messin with me
Only time your lyrics are at large is when you push the shit key
3.....shit key?...wtf...
Funny thing is your verse doesn’t count for shit
You’d have to eat it for it to even amount to shit
2.....wft with you and this shit lines...it's whack
This kid can’t fuck with me it’s like he had a vasectomy
It’s like you got no legs the way you don’t watch your step homie
3..first line was str8..but 2nd was horific
My words have you ripped to shit, bitch just quit
Your styles more bit than p diddy’s tooth pick
5...liked the punch but the set-up was generic n whack
Fo shiz you’ll never make it in this rap bizz
Fuck it. Sizz aint nuttin/nothing, yea he cant even jizz
3...sex jokes like these are played and newbish

Another battle , win or lose, Tim Dim guess which way I'ma send you,
How do you think I can lose to an MC named from your local chinese menu?
5....ok nameplay
I'm makin this win quick, have this dude thinkin it was only a dream,
Revved up like capuccinos, got the sugar, I'm the pigeon shittin the cream,
3..whack
Makin you look dumb, embarassment ain't covered by your Insurance Provider,
Pastor finish the exorcism, after this encounter you won't be a Soul survivor,
4...weak
Wins against me come few and far between, non-existent like prehistoric animals,
Gettin Chinese on some Tim Dim, eating this nigga like a pack of wild cannibals,
3..not much of a punch...threats actually
At the end of the day the best man wins and believe it I plan to be the winner,
Cuz after readin this verse and losing you'll be bowing me like a repenting sinner,
3...self glorifing

OK..this battle was weak in my opinion.
But I gotta give it to Sizz.
Tim Dim...get some better concepts.You were like a newb with ur punches.Those 1st bars were about shit.Shit?I mean...large/shit key?...wtf is that?And then..at the end of ur verse..he can't jizz?..that's ur punchline?That's played.Get better concepts.

Vote-Sizz
RTF in sig in 3days....or this vote will be removed :thumbup:

ALL those battles!!!!!!! SHIT DAWG!!!! I can do like 1-2 maybe but FUCKING 4! DAMN!

LMAOOOOOOO

dawg...I meant RTf on 1 of them....

Voted For: the s!zz

tim tim
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Shit g.. why’d you bother messin with me
Only time your lyrics are at large is when you push the shit key
Funny thing is your verse doesn’t count for shit
You’d have to eat it for it to even amount to shit
This kid can’t fuck with me it’s like he had a vasectomy
It’s like you got no legs the way you don’t watch your step homie
My words have you ripped to shit, bitch just quit
Your styles more bit than p diddy’s tooth pick
Fo shiz you’ll never make it in this rap bizz
Fuck it. Sizz aint nuttin/nothing, yea he cant even jizz
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alot of weak shyt here bro....step ur game up..you got a vocab but ur not really using it..
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LFS
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Another battle , win or lose, Tim Dim guess which way I'ma send you,
How do you think I can lose to an MC named from your local chinese menu?
I'm makin this win quick, have this dude thinkin it was only a dream,
Revved up like capuccinos, got the sugar, I'm the pigeon shittin the cream,
Makin you look dumb, embarassment ain't covered by your Insurance Provider,
Pastor finish the exorcism, after this encounter you won't be a Soul survivor,
Wins against me come few and far between, non-existent like prehistoric animals,
Gettin Chinese on some Tim Dim, eating this nigga like a pack of wild cannibals,
At the end of the day the best man wins and believe it I plan to be the winner,
Cuz after readin this verse and losing you'll be bowing me like a repenting sinner,
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straight verse here....you know how to make punchlines...and ur punchs got my vote....
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v/LFS the Great aka THE s!zz

can i get an RTF??....they in my sig

Voted For: tim dim

tim dim is this battle u asked me to vote on dwag???

tim dim took dis hands down.....

WTF isn't PMing for votes a DQ? And that's removed for NO explanation lol.