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Verbal Abuse vs Ice Pick
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 120 Minutes To Key Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-02-04 at 10:51 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 08:55 PM.
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Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 09:02 PM.
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I've got elevated standards mixed with an inclined rhymin' attack//
Battle in SUB ZERO temperatures to Yank the SPINE OUT YA BACK// Have you lying out flat......Real emcees, are part of a dying breed..... what you really need-to-do// is stop gettin' your nuts pumped up when you're on weed and brew// You're transparent, I can see through you....I'm known for wreckin// Careers on the net...see me clear as a threat...catch shells from your own weapon// Severely I'll wet.....your sweat suit, let loose, holes appear in your flesh// A Fetish to fukk you up....chunk,a spear in your chest to leave you a mess// I've been pushed to the edge, took a sledge,hammer to the roof of your head// then split in three.....with the sharp wedge.......blade of an axe/// You write and recite,bullshit for free, while I get paid to spit facts// I'm raping these tracks....feel like the BFI man, Taking out trash// Fresh flavored, so I'm making it last....Chinese Issue A.K. sprayin' em fast// No hesitation or delayin' on my part, just start, squeezing// My A.K.'s got V.A. bleeding....you're lungs are opened so air's leaking// Leading to having difficulty breathing.....seeing you gasping and weezing// I ain't gonna just leave 'em.......Nobody knows where V.A. went// Placement....body parts scattered about under the pavement// Teeth and head elsewhere in a furnace getting cremated// You can get away with murder....long as it's pre-meditated// |
somthing quick
Dont matter wanted to get it over and done with hopfully you dont toake 3 hours for your verse when i dropped a keyd verse in 10 minutes |
Erm...
Herbs Can Only Diss. Investigate this kid, watch 'em elaborate with Lips. Spit fire to this ice block, and watch me evaporate this Bitch. Recap To Fake a Diss, just a simple Resolution... Darwinism explains this coward, your Liquid, Guess whos Fusion? Best at usin'...personals to dry up Reputations. Loss of water supply, when you step to verbal Invasions. Self reprisentation, get a medic...his sigs in Trouble. Ill drain out your Purpose, like kids in puddles. Fibs in Doubles, your at your Vertical Limit. People wouldnt feel your flow, like humid days in a convertable Civic. Addin foriegn liquid to this thread, might soften you Out. Finish my lecture, and discipline this child...as im washin your Mouth. |
uppin for votes. leave links...i need credits. so i will return the favor.
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
damn in my opinion verbal killed it ... Ice Pick deff. had more lines but its not always quan. over qual. well sure as hell not in this case ... i saw some decent punches on Ice's side...some lines were a lil stretched but all in all it flowed ok ... verbal deff over powered him in the personal field which is what i think one it that and the flow and i was mos def diggin that closer .... hahahaha ... this was a nice battle stay up... |
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
my vote goes to this guy because he had a better flow going with his,...and his vocab was serious too.... return da favor~~~~http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138354 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Ice Pick
nice battle fellas, verbale abuse u was a decent flow, a few good disses and decent punches that was fairly effective plus u'r creativeness was slightly above average... 7.5 ice pick u had the better flow with more effective hit that was better to me, u'r creativeness was above average and every line was slick, plus u'r diss was decent as-well not a bad verse.. 8.0 outta 10 flow: ice punches: ice by far creative: ice vote ice: nice drop fellas |
Thanks for the real votes
I hate when people who want to battle me vote against me Fuckin pussy ass mother fuckers |
dont get upset ... your not going to win every battle ...
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
Flow: Verbal Abuse Structure: Verbal Abuse Punches: TIE Personals: TIE Metas: Verbal Abuse Multiez: Verbal Abuse Creativity: Verbal Abuse Enjoyment: Verbal Abuse VOTE: Verbal Abuse Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
y'll return the fav and vgote in this battle plz
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138618 |
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