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LYNCHed VERSus GAMETIME
yo
10-15linesmax blindspit drop by tonite or get Dqed im gunna be offline i gotta read my son a bed time story then im droppin my shit aite checkin so i no i dont waist time on a verse to merk u |
check in and shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................
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.....Its Time to switch the Game like i'm an angry Brotha Lynchin Klans.....
.....shove my blueprint down ur throat glands cuz im in the mood to relunquish plans..... .....my people cant resist it man, get merked by me and 5 voters cuz i roll with delinquint fans..... .....i'll have the Brotha Lynch hung, u dead weight while my mass expands..... .....this extra 4 pounds in my pants will clasp in the grasp of these spastic hands..... .....I Dante Hall rap, cuz i leave verse kickers swallowin their might..... .....Lets touch mics, feel ya time trickle down cuz Game gots clutch in rhyme fights..... .....my technique strikes fright, set ya whole Garden Block ablaze..... .....my bullets trim ya waves, and cut up bushes to reveal ya Hedge Maze..... .....runnin circles dazed, cant find the exit cuz my words are too blatant.... .....aint nobody hatin, its just that u lost and cant be found like a fuckin FREE AGENT..... .....dont keep me waitin, go ahead and read ya kid the story about the rabbit in the race..... .....u must learn to never post shit like that cuz i'll punch ya own gloves to ya face..... The last lines are about dude tellin me he gonna read his kid a bedtime story....Garden Block is location....Free agent yall will see |
waitin for dude right here.......dont feed off verses aight.....and dont no show...haha......peace out...
GameTime... |
well ima crash the fuck out.......if u dont post by tonight then i get the win....like u said aight....but post cuz i dont want a fuckin wasted verse and shit...peace out
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mods close this cuz this fag is a no show...........add that W to my record.....fuckin foo no showin............................................ ........................
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^LOL
i alwayz show up... Yo. peep Whos this lite weight tryna fuk wit,I mite take da Win Cuz i Rumble- fools// ITs early kid dont quit-so-soon, my spits are gaining me that-Double U(W)// Only way u gunna win is if i get D-QED, so start thinkin-logical// Its time for u to Create GAme ,Cuz u spittin Heat is lyrikal-impossible// Stop da front ya lines aint-Ill my rhymes are money so u comin up-killed// It aint funny ,u dOne like a dummy,Plus u just aint as Skilled// Im a rap addict i slap faggats,that think they game can be Compaired// But u StillAInt MATTIC,cuz i no u rappin from ya dads computer chair// TImes up,ino your my fanactic,So sad bitch that u tryed to temp me// ITs like spittin a half ass spit to take da Win,Im alwayz ready// Im droppin Lyrikal punches out,so u shud ya mouth cuz u aint gunna blow up// Cuz ya rap suks,i punish the unprepared,so u hope i dont show up// |
opener-game
closer-game...both were weak wordplay-lynch punches-lynch personals-tie vocab-game creativity-tie overal-game i wasnt feeling none of these verses i thought both came weak lynch did good wit his multies though...still didnt have the vocabulary...it was too elementary game gets this by the hair on my chiny chin chin peace |
uppin for votesssss
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weak battle---first off---gametime ya had an ok flow, good structure, punches were blahh----lynch ya had an aight flow, aight structure, punches were aight ya had more personals which gets ya my vote=lynch
peep my shit out in the sig and vote thanx |
aight...a little fuckin late but lets get votes........uppin #1 and shit.......votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
good shit brotha lynch |
uppin mothafuckin 2 .................vote now people............................................ .................................................. ................and explain em well unlike cutastraphe's shit
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quit fuckin sleepin man.........uppin #mothfuckin 3.............lets get some honest votes up in this piece.......come now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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personals - none
vocab - tie ceativity - tie punches - game overall - game this was kinda weak hard to choose winner both kinda same but game i liked this line .....my technique strikes fright, set ya whole Garden Block ablaze..... .....my bullets trim ya waves, and cut up bushes to reveal ya Hedge Maze..... good match now can u guys hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86810 thanks- |
For A Newb...
Lynch Came Nice... I Thought His Punches Came A Bit Harder... Flow Was Real Close... Everything Else Was Almost A Tie... Just Gotta Go WIt Lynch On Dis... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86480 Honest Vote... Vote-Lynch |
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