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Zone Out 11-07-08 01:01 PM

Come fuck with Zone Out..
 
I know I know its been a minute since I've recorded anything.. but I got some new shit comin soon. and since unfortunately I AM a rv member, yall will be the first to hear my new shit
but in the mean time, just to add some activity to the site, I'll post up some of my old classic shit

haha

the myspace is www.myspace.com/zoneout1

I go hard on every song on there
tell me what you think

Tha .Q 11-07-08 08:07 PM

is this an open invitation to have sex?








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Zone Out 11-08-08 08:42 AM

Yeah.. as long as you leave feedback afterwards

Shear Kaughn 11-08-08 10:58 PM

i'm listeing to your first track...sounds nice..i like it. got like an old nYc style or something

Zone Out 11-09-08 11:17 PM

hahaha straight?
maybe the old nyc style, back when niggas was really spittin it how it should be spat is just how raw ass Detroit niggas like myself, rap.
what you think?

Tha .Q 11-10-08 08:53 PM

^^I think you are cool.










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Speats 11-13-08 05:29 PM

like that its ugly track, love the beat, really nice flow overall good tracks to lazy to leave more feedback

Zone Out 11-13-08 06:45 PM

Thanks yall..
I aint the type to trip over detailed feedback.
I just wanna remind niggas that I DO get down, ya know?

La Cosa Nostra 01-06-09 09:44 PM

You got a good vocal.. but you dont utalise it well enough... and you need to up your lyrics....

I listened to a few tracks off that myspace... beats are all good, but you need work... more consistancy with dope lines... some of your rhymes are boring cause ya techniques can be a bit simplistic.. word usage... conceptual issues and I'm sure you could utalise that already half decent sounding vocal a lot better...

keep doin ya thing man... i dunno if your trynna make rap a career if you are ill be a lot more specific otherwise ill just leave it at that....

Chris Stylez 01-07-09 03:55 PM

I though they were new songs. But I like the the song Fuck a Hook. Talkin bout police brutality is always a good one. Lookin for a collab from ya one of these days homie.
Get at me.

Zone Out 01-11-09 03:49 AM

All these songs are over a year old.
:-\


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